|Reviews for Symbiotic|
| OurSilentSongs chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I do love the style of this. The context, the execution, the simple depth. Perhaps I'm reading into it a bit too much, but either way, I adore it, and it is beautiful.
| disturbinglyprofound chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Again, I have nothing more to say than that your writing is beautiful. The tension between Olaf and Violet is mesmerizing to read. Thanks for sharing!
| Doctor Harley Quinn chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Eee-hee-heesh. And I mean that as a strongly-felt compliment. This is a pairing that SHOULD make the skin crawl even while we scratch away for more. Nothing is romanticized here- it's all just creeping and raw and eerie, exactly as it should be.
Your style is beautiful, and though you seem to have retired this account a few years back, I do hope you're still writing something, somewhere.
| luechesie chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Ooo...me gusta, definitely.
| marauderluverz chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
This was a very good story. I enjoyed it. The way you wrote it kind of made it more intense. :) Good job!
| card castles chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
This was a very wicked fic. Of course, that's exactly how I like it. Violet/Olaf is one of my favorite pairings - it's so twisted, yet so captivating in it's own sick way. Maybe I'm just a sucker for girls in abusive relationships _;
I particularly enjoyed the last one.
| Megsy42 chapter 1 . 9/26/2008
I love the mysterious feel of this piece; every part had it's own poetic, dark tone. Great job!
| Chess chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
Gah. That was excellent. Very upsetting (as this pairing would be, haha). It's also surprisingly in keeping with the tone of the books, even though it's much darker. Awesome.
| Vintage88 chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
That was brilliant. Really dark and beautiful. Favorite line was 9. : ' "How so?" He never does answer.'
Definitly a fav as it's dark yet beautiful in a poetic way.
Keep it up!
| Harmonic Friction chapter 1 . 10/4/2007
Wonderful. So much outstanding imagery!
And thank you for the alets, favs and subscribing to my community. Really appriciated!
| DyingMethusalah -Takuaritakiku chapter 1 . 9/5/2007
I love this pairing T.T
-DM and Taku-Chan
| saturnella chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
I'd like to review this poem, but for once I'd rather you didn't reply to it. It seems to me that everytime I comment one of your stories, you reply to it and point out all the 'wrong things' that are in my review. These are merely my opinions and I will ask you to politely respect them.
Anyways, I found this poem to be rather nice, but a bit choppy. It doesn't flow the way I'd like it too, but then again, it's your poem. The descriptions, however, are outstanding; I'll give you a brownie point for that. Overall, it was quite nice and I did enjoy it; it was very unique. Good job, mate.
(I will be expecting a reply to this review, pointing out my grammatical errors and comments about my opinions, even though I asked you not to do this. But I know you will end up doing it anyways, because you can not resist the temptation of pointing out my wrong doings.)
| Kohaku Kawa chapter 1 . 12/30/2006
It reminds me of slam poetry with all the music in it. Oh and it's perfect how it is, I don't need any extra details to bog it down.
| Rock Not War chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
I really liked this story, great job.
| Issy B chapter 1 . 8/5/2006
i didnt get it so i had to read over i guess i got confused witn all the nummbers and spaces and stuff but it was ok