Reviews for The UsThem Complex
Guest chapter 4 . 6/29
yo-you sneaky sneak, naruto's four-eyed comment wasn't- wow i'm just gobsmacked, i was not expecting for that comment to pop up again and wow that flashback really helped characterise naruto and good job, great job writing this fic so far
Guest chapter 9 . 6/18
I really hate that you had to end it, there was something special about thus story. That something had me smiling every time
LightWithoutDarkness chapter 8 . 12/14/2015
I really enjoyed reading this story. It's really sad that you have discontinued it but in a way it also felt natural that you ended up there. Naruto returning back to Sai and finally accepting the relationship, well I guess that still kind of gives a satisfactory feeling to it all. Of course I would love to read more but no matter, thank you for this story. It's was realistic and even though it wasn't set in the shinobi world, the characters were not OOC like most stories would be when they're AU. You've really accomplished an amazing feat by doing that. Brilliant work!
Haruko92 chapter 8 . 9/18/2015
Well, it's a sort of ending. Lol. Despite a few things, i actually like you're fic. Though i wish there was more, it's not a big cliff hanger. I really wanted to see how Naruto would react to Sai in glasses. Lol.
Cartlin chapter 5 . 8/15/2015
Having someone essentially sexually assaulted isn't a prank. It's SICK.
Cartlin chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
WTF is up with your constant use of the word "fag"? It's EXTREMELY offensive hate speach.
CitrusFlag chapter 9 . 12/5/2014
Wow. That was sudden. I think my heart stopped when I saw this chapter.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/24/2014
Let of tell you something: I'm freaking mad at you for discontinuing this story. now believe of when i tell you that it was gripping amazing funny over average sexy interesting well written and so on. you have style AND talent i wish you would notice that and continue, unless you have problems in real life-that i would understand. have a nice life, i mean it : )
finerspirit (find my acount and write back to of there. I'm on my phone and have trouble logging on)
C chapter 9 . 11/25/2013
raeofshock chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I wish you would continue the story but I had SO much fun reading it! That was great :D
JiaPerfection chapter 9 . 1/18/2011
I died a little inside after finding out you discontinued. This was by far the best fanfiction I have ever read. Could you at least get to where they actually have sex? I know I sound perverted but it's such a good story xD Even just one more itty bitty chapter? Puh-lease?
Alicia chapter 9 . 1/12/2011
I fucking loved it! Especialy since, for the most part, everyone was in character!
Khandalis chapter 9 . 1/2/2011
Argh! No! It ended! *sigh*

This was the first NaruSai that I've ever read, and it was VERY good. Anywhere else that I have seen Sai, people just dangle his aloof personality int he air for the reader to decipher. However, you go into depth to analyze it in the story. That is what makes this exceptional.

Oh, and I also find the whiny/PMsy version of Sasuke very amusing. Or, at least he seems whiney and PMsy to me. lol

If possible, it'd be nice if you would continue this. But if you can't, it was actually a good place to end. (at least change the status to complete!)
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 9 . 9/5/2010

Well just savor the few chapter you have written to the best. Why aren't you planning to continue these one shots?
Afuri chapter 9 . 5/14/2010

Why u do that? Why u didnt continue dis story!

Dis the most awesome fic I have ever seen!

Really bad u didnt continue dis story dear..

Hiks.. '(
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