Reviews for Mikan Wears A Bra
Kaya-chan90 chapter 8 . 4/13/2007
I like your fanfic! -

The end is very good like the story! -

It suits the story! ob

Kaya-chan
frienz4ever chapter 8 . 4/12/2007
T.T Hotaru and Mikan's friendship is so sweet .

Seriously! This story is TOO good! Im looking forward to reading your other GA stories :)

*adds to favourite*
SKIE2314 chapter 8 . 4/10/2007
Ne! I had a hunch Nonoko's "shampoo" was the root of it! That was a great fic! I knew it! The ending was really sweet...(_)
SKIE2314 chapter 4 . 4/10/2007
Oh my gosh! that's so humiliating for Mikan! Poor her! (I am like, laughing so hard now.) That's really funny- the way you made it seem like everyone was taking it seriously, but then finds out it's menstruation... You're good! Hahaha. I like it! (_)
Izzu chapter 6 . 3/29/2007
I liked how you had written so far. Tho... there are some things you could fix.

/Mikan noticed a slight tinge of pink on his cheekbones/

there are similar types of errors that I noticed... but I rather not making it too stuffy. Things like... blushing... or if someone was reacting to something and changes occur on face like vein twitching ect, I think you better rewrote them as '-feeling her cheeks burning' or 'feeling as if a vein just twitched on the side of his head' and other similar things. Because saying you can say that Mikan can see her cheekbones turn red is... weird. Because I myself can't see my sheeks from the side of my line of sight. XD

Unless it was Natsume or other person saying it, that line seem a little... illogical.

Pointers.
BunnySocks chapter 8 . 3/27/2007
I love this story! It's so cute The idea was really awesome; Mikan experiencing new things and growing in the process. I'm so glad, you ended the story perfectly! Thanks for sharing this with us!
xxGAG chapter 8 . 3/17/2007
aww... i wanted Mikan and Natsume to get together... oh wells. xD i love your story! it's so funny!
Golden Dim-sum chapter 8 . 2/20/2007
aw...tht was sweet

Very very well writen _

I'll be waiting for your next story,

best luck!
Golden Dim-sum chapter 7 . 2/20/2007
Mann...ThatHajime dude sure is a bad influence to his brother!
krizzia hidalgo chapter 8 . 2/14/2007
itss so wonderfull story! i read i love this im the one of your milion fan reader krizzia at ur service thank you for sharing ur story can i have some and one question does hotoru fall inlove w/ ruka?

tjhanks again
natsume Lover 312 chapter 8 . 2/9/2007
I loved the story but why braws and what is with no love with natsume! Why did you make him kiss her so fersly if you diddnt want them to be togather in theend. i litterally cryed in the end i really thaought this story would end diffrent from the others. But keep righting but not as pervertedthat stuf got king of gross.
Hikashe Otome chapter 8 . 2/4/2007
hehe... :)
Koniko-chan chapter 8 . 1/24/2007
lol that was wild I loved how you managed to keep the charm of the show in the story lol would't watch porn with him lol! great job!
Jericka chapter 8 . 1/18/2007
This fic is AWESOME! I stayed up all night because of this. Hehehehe! I'm not surprised why so many people liked it! It must have been difficult trying to write it. :D
seshire chapter 8 . 1/5/2007
this rocks so much!

especially Hakato..hehe..

only if he wasnt a porn then I would really like him,natsume,ruka and mikan to be together ...aw...sweet Best friends..hotaru and mikan
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