Reviews for Mikan Wears A Bra
Nessie-san chapter 8 . 8/26/2010
Good job. I really liked it, and the twist with Nonoko was extremely interesting *Natsume points a finger with a flame on it a Nonoko, while a hawk Ruka brought is hovering above her "I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'll never do it again! I PROMISE!" she whimpers* LOL on the Mikan doll. I think it's great that you put Mikan dolls in it, since that's Hotaru's ultimate goal (although in her case, she wants to create more of a Mikan clone, since she wants to create a completely perfect replica). Also, I find it odd that Mikan doesn't decide to date Natsume. I mean, I get it. She doesn't want to ruin her's and Ruka's friendship, or his and Natsume's, but she really loves him, and he really loves her. Her feelings for Ruka are more like her feelings for Hotaru, she loves him, but not romantically (in my opinion, anyway; don't know about other people). Now, for a technical review: There were almost no mistakes in this, however I did notice a few word fumbles here and there. Mostly in the last two chapters, but I can understand that. I mean, being almost finished with an eight chapter story could make anyone a little sloppy, right? Yes. So, in short, amazing story, LOVED what you did with the characters, and I find it hillarious(sp) that so many guys are falling for Mikan. Especially DA guys. I mean, I really wouldn't expect that many of them to fall for her. I mean, there's what, five guys in the DA class, and two out of the five like/love Mikan? Wow.
Nessie-san chapter 7 . 8/26/2010
I usually don't respond to chapters until the end of a story, but I HAVE TO RESPOND TO THIS! I agree with you on the "It was hard not to take it further" comment at the end. I've written several NatsumexMikan fanfics where things get...intimate...the first one is when they were eleven, so I REALLY had to restrain myself. The second is when they're twelve (hasn't happened in the manga yet...) on Mikan's twelfth birthday...things happen...(Not TOO much, they are only twelve, after all...actually, Natsume's younger than Mikan...so he's still eleven...) thank God I wrote the third one for when they're sixteen. Anyway, I totally understand that predicament. It's just soooooo hard to resist!
easy love chapter 8 . 8/26/2010
It was amazing. Everything:)
bullsh.t chapter 7 . 8/13/2010
LMAO, sweet plus funny.

Especially with the porn thing. xD
porksoup chapter 8 . 8/8/2010
Awww delightfully adorable! Thanks for writing! Pretty hilarious... Hw Nonoko accidentally switched the shampoo got switched and everything :P

Thanks for writing! Loved it! :3
forever-with-the-storm chapter 5 . 7/23/2010
awesome!
AliceElle chapter 8 . 7/23/2010
This story had a lot of comedic relief and I have to say the characterizations seemed very accurate. I like how you took a spin and turned this into more of a friendship story and less of one that dealt completely with a relationship.
hAe-chan 61595 chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
wahahah...nice!the last part was funny!
hAe-chan 61595 chapter 4 . 5/15/2010
OMG! what happened to Mikan?

Nani sore!

o_o
hAe-chan 61595 chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
hahaha...I feel sorry for Mikan...I really pity her when her undergarments flew and landed on Natsume...and in the second chapter, I agree...she is so naive..she shouted that she wanted bigger chests...at first I hesitated if I'm going to read this but I am so bored that is why I just read it... I ended up laughing my heart out when I read some funny parts...nice job!
hakivah chapter 8 . 4/6/2010
WOW i just finished reading your story, it was illustrious.

haha i was laughing so hard about Hajime and his porn addiction thing. that was hilarious!

lol, it was espicially funny becuz when mikan was like "whats that?" it reminds me of my younger self when i thought it was a shorter version for PopcORN, so at the movies i said can u plez pass the porn to my parents... eh that was a bad moment in my life... -_- but funny to look back on

at the scene where it was natsume mikan and ruka all in bed together, i thought that was very nice. to me, it kidna symbolized their love-triangle relationship (to mikan "friendship")how she loved both of them.

may or may not have been intentional :3

anyways, it's a lot to request, but i know that if you made a sequel to this (somehow!) i would definitely be reading it!

cant wait to read your next story, thanks!

taytay
CuteLala chapter 8 . 3/13/2010
I actually think that this is one of the best fanfics of GA! Definitely one of my favorites. I wish there were more chappies... (starts looking with puppy-dog eyes at Wrath of Athena O.Q)
CuteLala chapter 5 . 3/10/2010
Wow! You really are good at writing! Keep up the good work. I hope you still write, I would like to read your other stories.

By the way I also like the pairing of NatsumeMikan and RukaMikan.
Blue-Sapphire1 chapter 8 . 1/31/2010
aw...

so sweet...

i sincerely loved it!...3

i like the way you wrote the story..it made me drift to lala land..(meaning..i didn't get distracted with typo, grammar and stuff problems)

D h0orah for you!

me adding this story to my favorites..w0h0o!
Sailor Panda chapter 8 . 1/17/2010
This was a fun read - great job!
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