|Reviews for The double agent's torment|
| Zoe chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This poem is abso-BLOODY-lutely amazing! Great, great work.
| fanfanatic09 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
this is really good
| brick-red-wall chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
that was really good! I'd never be able to write poetry like that. I just can't rhyme and even when i din't need to, it never makes sense. really great job! ]
| callernumber16onz100 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
I liked this a lot! I like how you portrayed Snape killing Dumbledore for the Order, or at least that's how I read it in your poem. Very interesting, it's cool to see things from the way Snape thinks them. Sometimes I do think Snape killed Dumbledore for the Order... but I still despise him for it... Awesome poem!
| Ebony Starstorm chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
A ghostly shadow's watching me
Waiting for my final, desperate move
Please let there be Dementors
Though I've nothing left to lose!
Through burns and charms that I have caused
I know I will stand proud
Until I see the Auror's come
And get stoned by the crowd!
I won't live to see the sun
But at least his time is short
Just don't think that I'll praise Potter
Even as a last resort!
Just a little funny, written for your fic!
| homeric chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
It isn't "pants" at all :) I enjoyed this - I don't usually read much HP poetry, but I liked this very much. Poor Snape - so misunderstood...
Best wishes and happy writing,
| LillyWright chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I loved your poem and I totally agree with your theory. Keep on the writing!
| luvbooks chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
wow this is a really good poem and you have made it really emotianal it made me cry.
| wingnutdawn chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
You have wrote a very good poem,
No matter where Snape will roam,
His mission still stands.
Help Potter do in Voldemort
and free the land.