Reviews for The double agent's torment
Zoe chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
This poem is abso-BLOODY-lutely amazing! Great, great work.
fanfanatic09 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
this is really good
brick-red-wall chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
that was really good! I'd never be able to write poetry like that. I just can't rhyme and even when i din't need to, it never makes sense. really great job! ]
callernumber16onz100 chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
I liked this a lot! I like how you portrayed Snape killing Dumbledore for the Order, or at least that's how I read it in your poem. Very interesting, it's cool to see things from the way Snape thinks them. Sometimes I do think Snape killed Dumbledore for the Order... but I still despise him for it... Awesome poem!
Ebony Starstorm chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
A ghostly shadow's watching me

Waiting for my final, desperate move

Please let there be Dementors

Though I've nothing left to lose!

Through burns and charms that I have caused

I know I will stand proud

Until I see the Auror's come

And get stoned by the crowd!

I won't live to see the sun

But at least his time is short

Just don't think that I'll praise Potter

Even as a last resort!

Just a little funny, written for your fic!
homeric chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
It isn't "pants" at all :) I enjoyed this - I don't usually read much HP poetry, but I liked this very much. Poor Snape - so misunderstood...

Best wishes and happy writing,

H
LillyWright chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I loved your poem and I totally agree with your theory. Keep on the writing!
luvbooks chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
wow this is a really good poem and you have made it really emotianal it made me cry.
wingnutdawn chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
You have wrote a very good poem,

No matter where Snape will roam,

His mission still stands.

Help Potter do in Voldemort

and free the land.