Reviews for What If Dawn Was There When
applemysteries chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
Loved this. :)
kutoki chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
XD Monkey Brains! XD This story was priceless. I love it!
RyanKathrynCelia chapter 2 . 9/27/2007
lol, love the monkey brains comment. Your young Dawn is cute D... it is said that younger children can pick up on the 'goodness' or 'badness' of a person, and I know that Dawn is 11 here, but it's still a nice thought really.
Mentally Insane Fangirl chapter 1 . 1/28/2007
Awhh that so sweet! (Saves to faves)
PepperLaurie chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
That was so adorable! I don't think I'm going to be able to wipe the grin off my face for days! (which might be a little awkward when I'm back at school lol, just kidding) But still, that was really cute.


~Kitty chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
That is so cute! Monkey brains... nice. Spelling and grammer were perfect.


Captain Tinsley Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
That was amazing! So cute and funny! Do you mind if I put it on my C2? It's about Spawn friendships.
Funky-Skiz-Taboo chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
hahaha that was so cute i loved it!

the whole dawn and spike thing was just to adorable!

great work!
Jade Eclipse chapter 1 . 5/30/2006
Oh, if that wasn't just the most adorable thing ever! My only complaint is that Dawn seemed so childish- I was eleven just a few years ago myself, and she acted more around five. However, I think that's perfectly agreeable and wouldn't dare suggest you change it because the story itself was so charming altogether. It was a sweet little retelling of one of my favorite scenes from Spike's 'evil' days, and was most definitely worth a smile. It was easy to spot the beginnings of Dawn's long-lived crush on our favorite vampire, and Spike's equally long-lived nickname for her. It was a cute little snippet of the Buffyverse and I enjoyed it greatly.

Keep Writing!

PhantasmBunny chapter 1 . 5/23/2006
that was wicked cute :D