Reviews for Predictions gone wrong chapter 3 . 12/22/2007
Hm. Mark is suspsious. Lili really needs to talk to Hiro or meet him something. Update soon please. chapter 2 . 12/22/2007
AW. I really liked the last line of the poem. :D

I am looking forward to the update.
Listening IN chapter 1 . 12/17/2007
Very nice. The work is well done. The small tid bit that the other reviewer submited may have helped us, the readers, a little bit. However I will continue reading this tale. Thank you.
Rebelling One chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
I have finally found time to read this. That's the good news. The bad news is it's 1am and a school night. I have to say your writing has improved, but you might want to add in some of the reasoning you told me about in the chapter. Such as the reason why Mark let Lili run off without questioning her because he thought it was her first time at a crime scene or something like back to the praise, loving it, your beautiful, graceful, I want to marry you, just kidding! _ Though I do like the story so far. Now it's my turn to poke you and say "update".
GoldenSnowfire chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
it's good so far. oh and please tell me it's a lh fic!