Reviews for Bikini Blues
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23
this was very adorable
MercyShadow chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
I don't usually ship them together... What can I say, I like anything that isn't the extreme obvious.. But they way you've written them... I think I've actually found one of the few times I'll admit I like this pairing.. Nice work.
blackhearts107 chapter 1 . 9/12/2015
Guest chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
Love it!
KeiChanz chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
This was freaking adorable. Well done. Loved it. )
Skykitty37 chapter 1 . 5/31/2015
I absolutely love this story and can easily imagine this actually happening XD
But the twins saying "invite us next time" just killed me. After that I couldn't stop laughing XD
Once again, love the story and keep up the good work
HChen.RavenFeather chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
Way too funny of a one shot Could you extend it to a sequel? With A foursome between the twins, Haruhi, and Tama? It's funny how Mitsukuni is the only one deprived of info. Private infor that the rest of the hosts have witnessed.
Fujioka Ran-Chan chapter 1 . 1/9/2015
Yeah haruhi never again
Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
That was good! Not to much and not too little. Keep writing, you have a gift for it!
Talvi chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
Nice, even though the characters were a little different from how I imagined them.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
did we find them?
dont look youll be ruined for marriage

ohmygod i just died
Conrii chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
The end was the best!
ImpaledPrince chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
"I can pay the police to go away." Tamaki is such a sweetie. XD
Seriously, I normally have an almost prudish despise of lemons, but this one was so hilarious and well-written that I couldn't help but love it. You've got a convert.
The Quirky One chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
OH MY GOSH XDDD I loved this!
DP chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
I loved this fanfiction but, I think that Tamaki shouldn't be the one to be so... um perverted? He should be like "Haruhi, only when your ready." Because thats just how he is. And on a beach, really? I like the fact you used the beach because the beach is romantic sometimes but he wouldnt have sex with her on a beach! Never in public! he would have been like hell no and so would have haruhi. I liked what you did at the end with kyoua and honey the twins and mori but I really would not want them to see her naked. It kinda makes me think tamaki used her to make porn or something because kyoua had a video camera and ya thats what I think. - constructive critisisim
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