|Reviews for Eye of the Beholder|
| Teen titans fan 121 chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
I really love this story I know you probably aren't reading this, but I'd like to say this was really good. I got lost in the story, great job!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Cool story!:) Why can't more authors portray Raven as an artist, and less as part of BBxRae?
| NEVERMORE DARKNESS chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
one of the most inspiring stories ever read!
| Chanceless chapter 1 . 9/23/2008
Oh, WOW. You know, I was reading that whole thing thinking you'd written it about me. Because that's EXACTLY what I do. I waste my extra time drawing and painstakingly writing up roleplay posts or character sheets or...whatever...when I should be working on my stupid novel project for AP Lit class.
This was incredibly inspiring.
| Rubik's Cubed chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
You write so beautifully. You really should write more RobRae, and I guess I am going to have to read some RobStar if I want to be able to enjoy some more of your writing.
| SylverEyes chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Sometimes, I think I like RaeRob friendships even more than I like RaeRob relationships. Am I a twisted shipper? O_o
Anyways, this was sweet. I like how Raven could change his opinion with just one drawing, and her own opinions that I'm not sure she even ever meant anyone to read. It's nice; just like their friendship should be.
Sort of like a random snapshot in their lives, and I like that. I like the fact that they already seem to have a bond even if it is the first time that they've ever really spoken to each other. It's very sweet.
This made me smile with happiness. I think I'm going to be terminally happy. Time to go and devour more of you delicious stuff. Yum.
| Smirks of Apathy chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Well I said I'd review, and dammit, I'm gonna keep to that ]
I admire the present tense thing you have going on. Thats a difficult thing to accomlish CORRECTLY. That said, you've achieved it. There were no reversions to 3rd person, or anything of the like.
I'm not that great at grammar, but from what I see, no mistakes. However, you did spell sketch as 'ketch' in the second paragraph, but its not that big of a deal. I didnt catch anyything else to complain about. ]
This plot is interesting. It doesnt require that much of an exposition. The way this piece seems [to me] is that its a moment that touched Dick that just came out of a monotonous spell. I think its meant to tell a message, yet not be a full fledges STORY. Thats just how I took it.
Speaking of the message, I really do agree with that. Art really isnt appreciated as much as it should be, and not just paper/paint types. Music is also slowly trickling its way out of schools and such, and I don't think it should be that way. Acting. Dont even get me started on that. Its changing from judging an actor by how well he acts to judging an actor by who he parties with. It really annoys me.
And then the Robin/Raven platonic thing. I think thats amazing. In my opinion, platonic love is one of the best types of love. And I'm glad you decided to make it like that rather than some crudely [?] written lemon. But I think you have better taste than written porn. P
Overall, there isnt really much that I can say about improvement and such. This is a beautifully written piece with a wonderful message. *Adds to favorite authors list*
| bury me among the ashes chapter 1 . 7/27/2006
This story was good too, I promise to read more when I have the time!
| RyanGosling4Ever chapter 1 . 6/18/2006
Wow... That was... just wow... Your writings/works never cease to amaze me. I've been following your stories ever since ExBoyfriend (and everything else that you've written _), and they've just all got _something_ that sets them apart from all the other thousands of stories here on
While I'll readily admit that I'm 110% devoted to RobStar, BBTerra, and BBRae, and that I generally tend to stay away from RobRae, your RR stories are truly touching. This one may just be my favorite one ever.
Write, write, write! You're really talented, and you shouldn't let some douchebag tell you that writing is "a waste of time"! Grr...forget the flamers, HE/SHE/IT(?) should be eaten alive, for that! _
Best wishes, and hope to see more stories from you soon! _;;
| ljo chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
i like it...it is true to the characters and the details are very compelling
keep up the good work!]
| Rose Knows chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Sushi, I couldn't hate you- even if I tried. But you can't imagine the battle inside me right now, happiness and pride for your talent fighting with envy.
Of course, I've always been a rather jealous person... Tis great.
The friendship? Touching.
The characters? Well thought out, and perfectly in character.
The plot? Held interest, and was really fun to read.
The overall feeling/mood? Thought provoking. I really liked reading it.
Excellent job (as usual)
Long live Sushi!
| ravenslair chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I enjoyed this very much, and even though it's been said so many times before, I have a very strong feeling that this story should be continued. I just have a feeling you have a lot more to say, and I would leave to read it. Thanks...Gerry
| The Eccentric CheezySquirrel chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
I could practically see the picture you were describing... That was really well done! I'm gonna try to give you a well rounded critique, like the bottom of the review box thing suggests, but it's hard since I really don't see any areas where you could improve...
It was interesting how you wrote in present-tense. Normally I don't like things written in present-tense, but it seemed to fit in your story.
| Heartfelt Dream chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Oh my gosh, this one really spoke to me, Sushi. I don't know how to describe this, but everything you wrote in here... absolutely everything was amazing. And it's just the way I feel.
| butterfly madness chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
wow i can tell that you put your heart into this story! i enjoyed it keep it up :D