|Reviews for Killer Kid|
| 11OneDone2Many chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
u shouldn't worry about the concept of the story whether it's original or not..other ppl has done it b4... i really like ur direction of the story...i can see some of what naruto can do in this...it's up to u...how u want naruto 2 come alive..
i've read many different kinds of naruto fics that almost have the similar concept but either they are complete or not...i wouldn't want to see 1 such as this story go to waste just like that...
pls update soon!
looking 4ward to this story!
| some reader 21 chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Well, good story
Nice idea too, if you think about it, Naruto should have used it...
I also know it's a bit that you got some reviews and maybe I'm a bit too late with ideas?
Well anyhow I'm writing them to you anyway, kay?
How this will continue you will have to divide in three parts:
1. Naruto himself. He builds up a self-esteem but with Sarutobi's help he won't become arrogant. Maybe he has a conversation with Shikamaru to see that there are other 'smart' persons out there besides the Hokage and himself...
2. The villagers. They just wiped their hatred in his face to feel better and now he starts fighting back. So at first the situation gets worse, you don't want to let old habits die easily. There will be some though who start seeing him as a boy like he is. For example Teuchi and Ayame *wink wink*
3. Sarutobi and his role as a hokage. I think he has to deal with Danzou's renewed pleas for using Naruto as a 'weapon', arrogant council's demandings to stop the 'demon' from hurting the poor innocent villagers and finally his job himself. To explain the last, a hokage has to be there for their whole village and not just for a boy. He can think about sending him away for a while...
Finally I think you shouldn't let the everyday pairings take over in this story, think of something original (that doesn't mean he can't play the dumb fool in the academy...after all if he sees underneath the obvious hate from his teachers he should be as weak and dumb as possible. So he plays exactly like that and studies in private. But his flaring weakness, his chakra-control sucks nonetheless, Kyuubi's chakra won't get less just because of some killer intent infused stares...)
Well, I hope they were some good idea starters for you...I'd like to read a new chapter from this fic
| Amei-chan chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I never read this fic either... I seem to be realizing that as of late... ANYWAY, even if Naruto is OOC, it's is a cool idea. I mean, that exchange between him and the Sandaime was funny. I wish you'd continue this someday... When I first read this, I thought he was going to be master wordsmith or something, lol
Um... Maybe you could later have a mob attack and they all fall down dead, hahaha. Heh...
| Slytherson chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
please update soon!
| Hourou shunketsu chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
please update soon!
| Inverness chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Thats good, Naruto using Kyuubi's killer intent to scare the crap out of people.
| conlan0414863 chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
keep on typing and ill keep on reading
| Delusional Fishies chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
| Bobboky chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
excellent, and i hope some one uses a shock tech on the poor shop keeper before Naruto gets in trouble for murder