|Reviews for A Cage Not of Metal|
| thefallofthespirited chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
this was really good. i think it made a decent amount of sense.
| Amara Corbin chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
That was... strange... but good! But strange...
Ha! No, it was really quite cute. I liked it. Maybe work on some sentance structure? "Akito just smiled wider..." perhaps more effective as eg. "Akito's smile broadened."? Just a thought, keep up the writing!
| Adi88 chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
| Teh Future Mrs. Kyo Sohma chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
Ooh, that was good.
So true... T-T