Reviews for Progeny
happymp7 chapter 12 . 1/12
This is one of my favorites from way back; I decided to reread a bunch of old fics the other day.

I only have a few of issues with the fic: first, there are a ton of typos; but none cause any issues with understanding the intent. (Fight scene at the Tokyo tower does have Mars showing up right after you said she wouldn't be there in time, but I figured you meant Minako.)

Second, you often develop a line of thought then add a line referencing some event from a past life but without adding an explanation of that event for how it explicitly relates to the current event.

Third, the new love interests drop in too fast. No sooner does someone decide they need to move on then they have their next serious relationship drop in their lap. I like the way Shampoo and herb come together, but everyone else seems to be luck of the draw. I'd like to see Nabiki fight harder for Ranma and earlier in the fic (why can't she go see him at night to hide her changes once she finds out where he is?).

Finally, I think the characters in general give in to their past lives too quickly. Ranma goes from fighting Aramas' memories of Isis to nearly having sex with Ami in one day, with no real examination of where those feelings come from. Is it her, is she filling in for Akane, or is it the past life creating those feelings? It'd be interesting if he had more doubts and if you'd explore more of the love triangle angle with Nabiki. I'd think people would find themselves fighting old habits that they'd only recently acquired.

I hope to see more chapters of this someday.
Arun chapter 12 . 2/6/2014
Jeff,
Visited your profile after the longest time. Read your response to what'shisname's review. I guess he/she caught you at a bad time. I'm happy that you haven't abandoned any of your stories and I do look forward to reading more whenever you put out new stuff. Until then, concentrate on family, friends and work. Hobbies can wait. The others will not.
Arun
Flareup4Ratchet chapter 10 . 10/19/2013
Why did Artemis leave Luna at the alter? I'm very confused by this whole thing. There are a lot of things left out that leaves readers to speculate. I know I will never get the answer to this, since the fic is abandoned... *sigh* Sometimes I don't know why authors do what they do with canon couples/characters, but it's not me to judge. *shrugs* Again, I'm just confused by this whole story - which leads me to believe you have 'painted yourself into a corner' and couldn't get yourself out of it...
shugokage chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
Impressive chapter and incredible story!
Worldmaker chapter 12 . 10/12/2013
So... my knowledge of anime and anime fandom begins and ends with Akira and Cowboy Bebop. Seriously, that's it. My oldest son keeps trying them out on me, and I keep trying, but in the last six years, those are all the ones I've enjoyed.

I've got zero experience with Ranma and know nothing about it. But I really enjoyed this story. It was craftfully written and held my attention despite my unfamiliarity with the original material. Well done.
ranchan-akari chapter 12 . 10/7/2013
Oh. My. Friggin.' God. This is AWESOME! You made me stay up until 0400 to finish reading this! I love it! All the individual plotlines that spin into a cohesive whole and all the past lives connecting with the present...this is amazing. I can't wait for the next update! Pleasepleaseplease update again soon!
spriggan chapter 12 . 9/27/2013
Hi I read your story years ago and I just checked again to see if you'd finished it yet. Looks like you have a few more chapters. I'd really like to know how it all ends.
NaruHarem4ever chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
Wow! This story is one of the best stories I've ever read. hope you do decide to continue it
Grizzmon chapter 10 . 5/14/2013
I bet she picked Beijing...
Grizzmon chapter 9 . 5/13/2013
Well, Ranma will survive somewhat...
Grizzmon chapter 8 . 5/13/2013
Well, at least pig boy is happy...
Grizzmon chapter 7 . 5/13/2013
I don't know if pity Mako or think she is dumb... maybe both...
Grizzmon chapter 6 . 5/13/2013
Well, is still a bit cruel, is not even a year since he lost Akane...
Grizzmon chapter 5 . 5/13/2013
Yeah you say that now...
Grizzmon chapter 4 . 5/13/2013
Well, Ranma sure seems depressed...
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