Reviews for Normal Day Gone Wrong
Rufael chapter 1 . 10/13/2017
Why would anyone target a child? :( and that sniper sure was no pro, being seen and all that. Wish he were caught, beaten, broken, then have his stupid ass dumped at the nearest police station with all evidence to his crime attached to his neck.
Itachi's-Daughter chapter 1 . 3/29/2010
That story was just wow. Hear breaking that someone would Dilibratly shoot an innacent child. Good story though
rochelle chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
that's kinda sad that chibiusa got shot at why? and loe the story.
Mibz chapter 1 . 10/6/2008

I almost cried!


Keep 'em comin'

xeaphon chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
That was a scary situation and the worst part is that it can actually happen. Great job.
mermaidharmony chapter 1 . 1/5/2008
thank the gods that chibiusa is still alive great story!
Lady Razeli chapter 1 . 2/23/2007
I can't believe you had a three year old shot in the head, but it was good, you had me speechless for a good three minutes lol.
BloomAmber chapter 1 . 2/21/2007
Jewel88 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006
o! cute!
O00000 chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Whoo, that was pretty scary. I'm glad Chibiusa pulled through okay! -Whew!- Will there be another chapter coming soon, to resolve a few questions such as who the man is and and why he shot ChibiUsa? If so, I will be looking forward to it! (It's up to you, of course!)

Good job, and cheers!
Princess Usagi86 chapter 1 . 5/24/2006
Thats so sweet and also a bit sad to...but I liked it..
Sailor Star Super chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
GACK! that was scary! i'm okay though. great job!
StarmanWaitingInTheSky chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
It's a good start. But you left many unanswered questions.

Who was the shooter?

Why did he target ChibiUsa?

Was he caught?

How did the investigation go?

How did the Mamoru, and the others react to the news?

Also...if a person has brain surgery, it's very unlikely that they'll be awake and talking the next day as if nothing happened. They'd probably be in intensive care for several days.

Like I said, it's a good start. You just need to work on developing the story more.