|Reviews for Watching|
| Kohako Shadow chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Ah, an introspective look into the minds of Ivanov. He's just stating the truth and being totally nonchalant about it. I mean it's obvious how Takao and Kai always attract each other. Like a moth to a flame they are finding their ways to each other one way or the other, regardless of the world around them. Cute pairing but I wouldn't mind having a Takao sandwich with Kai and Yuriy against his side
| Thegoldenlock chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
I really like your way of describing Talas feelings here. Hes in character all the way through, all of them are. Tala is a great character and its sad how weak thay made him in season three...
Anyway brilliant job and keep writing
| Troublesome Aries chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
aw, that was good
| KaiXTala4ever chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
omg! a new story, i love it, poor Tala he is jealous about Tyson...but i have faith on Kai that he will notice that Tala it's for him.
| FirieGurl chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
that was so good and sweet of Yuriy and the ending was pretty good
| wingsonfire chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I like Takao/Kai pairing but I also enjoy reading Tala fics. Kai/Tala esp. I liked what you wrote. The way you portrayed Kai/Takao through Tala's eyes...and Tala's own feelings. There is a bond between Kai and Tala; why else would a comatose Tala cry after Kai's last battle with Brooklyn?
| Flinched chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
How dare you make me like fic that is remotely Takao/Kai?
I must say... that was great!
It's written so well, and it has something so very Tala'ish about it!
Thanks for the great one shot!
| cherry fantasy chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
It was very good, I also think Yuriy would act that way if the situation should come up ! Personally (and I try not to sound too corny ! ;;), I think that only Kai will ever match Takao and that only Takao will ever match Kai. And (just as you wrote ! -), I think that Yuriy would understand that as well. He's just smart that way ! (Maybe you've guessed by now that, after Kai and Takao, Yuriy is my favorite Beyblade character ! _ I loved the way you wrote his POV !)
Anyway, you did a great job on this one-shot, I loved it ! - Keep it up and take care !