Reviews for Underneath It All
Amara120 chapter 8 . 7/7/2006
I am really enjoying this story, I love the dynamics between all the charaters; very real and convincing.
anon-1 chapter 8 . 7/7/2006
I stayed up all night reading this. It has to be hands down one of the best fictional pieces of any fandom that I've ever read. Please update soon, this is seriously so amazing.
newbie chapter 8 . 7/5/2006
Love it.. Write more.. Update soon..

Would be better if there is some other plot other than the relationship between emma and jean, though i would have to say it is enough for me to keep reading. .
meremortal2k3 chapter 8 . 7/4/2006
I can't wait to read more. The story is fantastic so far.
CrimsonWhisper chapter 8 . 7/3/2006
Great chapter, i really love this story. i really liked emma's response to scott at the pool. i like that emma and storm are getting along. i cant wait for the next chapter.
Alphawolf69 chapter 8 . 7/2/2006
Updated score: Emma 3 Scott 0 (tut-tut ;D more embarrassing than the England vs. Portugal game...)

Emma really put Scott in his place didn't she? Pathetic, truely pitiful. He really reminded me of a spoilt child *cough* brat *cough* pouting and sulking because he didn't get his way. It was funny to watch Emma keeping the moral highground for once and throughly pissing him off in the process by showing him what a pig's ear he'd made of things. I didn't feel much sympathy for him though...I cracked up when I pictured him in goggles ;D...

I liked the bit at the end: 'It’ll be good for me to make some friends. Do you think I should invite her to my pool party? There’s going to be a clown and a pony! She’ll think I’m so cool.' - Emma's real vulnerability about making friends is hidden again under her dry humour.

Good stuff! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Perching Kite chapter 8 . 7/2/2006
yay, an update! i love this fic so much, out of all the xmen one's available on DEFINITELY ranks up there with not myself, 500 miles, etc. waiting... _
Ari chapter 7 . 6/30/2006
I am BEGGING you...

PLEASE update this fic soon, cause basically i've spent three days reading and re-reading what you have posted already. So, for the sake of my sanity, i am desperately pleading for an update on this.

One of my favorite things about this fic is the dialogue/interaction between Jean and Emma- from the mental conversation to the witty bantering, which, coupled with the emotion that you convey through the characters, incites an eagerness in the reader for more.

and I LOVE how Emma calls Jean 'Tiger.' It's deliciously sexy.

hope to see more soon,

ari
CrimsonWhisper chapter 4 . 6/26/2006
This is a bloody great story so far, ive gotten all misty. youve really captured the characters. there emotions are so real that i forget im reading about comic book characters. this has to be one of my favorite stories. great work.
Alphawolf69 chapter 7 . 6/25/2006
Top two favourite quotes from this chapter:

In second place it's: "You're really serious aren't you?" - Scott

Reason? My version of Jean's response made me crack up:

Jean *rolls eyes*: No Scott, you caught me, this was all an elaborate plot Emma and I constructed to pay you back for your inconsiderate and selfish macho 'I-have-to-be-strong-all-the-time-you-can't-possibly-understand-me-god-I'm-such-a-tortured-soul' behaviour and bruise your male pride. The enjoying the hot lesbian sex involved was just a fortunate (and welcome) side benefit...'

*tumble weed blows past*

I have an acquired humour...

Ahem, moving on...

But in first place: "I need you" Emma & Jean

Reason: Seeing Emma struggle to say that... I felt all maternal and 'aw' (WTF is wrong with me? I never say 'aw'...) Not very coherent, but *shrug* it's all I have.

There was a good balance of Scott's feelings of disbelief and betrayel and the soft love of Emma and Jean in this chapter. I was breathing out a sigh of relief when Jean wasn't attracted to Scott anymore, things would've got very messy if she still did...

As always, looking forward to the next chapter...

Oh, BTW, if you want check out my profile. I should have 1st chapter of my Emma/OC fic up...(it's been hanging round long enough -the characters are beginning to get pissed off with me... ;D) You and Princess Alexandria's stories encouraged me to get my arse in gear...
zee14 chapter 7 . 6/25/2006
Scott's a dick. You've got one of the dickiest Scott's around. I don't know if that's good or bad but it's meant to be a compliment. You're ability to capture the true nature of a total douchebag (Scott) is amazing. Kudos to you. This chapter is great! I look forward to more and I am so so glad you update quickly.
Perching Kite chapter 7 . 6/24/2006
blegh, scott is such a baby! talk about a guy needing a serious asskicking and a helmet for life! can't wait to see what happens next to the lovely ladies _
Jettanna chapter 6 . 6/20/2006
I am very much enjoying this story. I can't wait till you write more.
Alphawolf69 chapter 6 . 6/19/2006
Breakdown of chapter:

Scott: blah-blah-feel-sorry-for-myself-blah-blah-you-can't-understand-blah-blah-everything-can-be-like-I-never-abandoned-you-blah-blah...

Jean: No. I love Emma. That's it. Goodbye. See you later.(okay, that last bit *may* have been in Shrek ;D)

Scott: ... WTF! *sound of door closing*

Heh, drama, you got to love it... Another great chapter, I thought Jean's confused reactions to Scott were realistic (I'm glad she didn't regret choosing Emma) but felt really bad for Frost(hang in there kiddo)...

Can't wait for the next chapter, what will Scott do now? (Tip: Keep away from Emma, you prick)

BTW, do you have a rough idea how many chapters are left?
Perching Kite chapter 6 . 6/19/2006
Oh yeah, scott deserved that one! waitin...

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