This story is way too much like the original rehash...

Kakashi literally just gave away narutos element of surprise, his giving the enemy information they could use against his student, they could create counter measures and as naruto doest even know they know of his abilities hid be left to the fishes

I want them to die. They have no right to steal the hard work of naruto ! I wat sakura sasuke et kakashi to be severely punished !

i want kakashi for die.!

i don't like sasuke et sakura attitude. I want that they die.

Story makes no sense and seems ... I'm not sure inconsistent is the word I'm looking for but it's something along those lines. Half-hearted? Somethingish like that.

First chapter and I like you already

Orochi and Kabuto always survives in fanfics seemingly no matter how OP Naruto is. It's getting tiresome

Sakura shouldn't give away Naruto's secrets if she hopes to regain his trust

Kakashi Sucks ass for teaching Narutos personal jutsu to another without even asking or offering a even trade

Can you please make hinata character liitle stronger a good medical and best kunochi ever . Inovled her more in battle and healing

You seem to want to make it seem like naruto is smart and he’s hiding behind a mask but the way you wrote it makes naruto seem like an idiot the thinks he’s hiding behind a mask but he’s just an idiot

I don’t get this — Not quite what I expected…I guess I forgot to tell you but this bath water is seventy degrees. If you continue to fail, you'll become a boiled egg faster than a Hokage."
— is he saying hokages are boiled eggs?

Hbgg

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