I like it.

I don't understand why people use Japanese words in an English fanfiction when they know it would be simpler to many people to just fully use English ones.

I like your idea about smarter naruto. When i think about it again, it's almost impossible that naruto is stupid. He becomes the best shinobi in the end after all, so he must be at least smart, not only hardworking loudmouth. One thing that i like most about this story is about naruto make some jutsu by himself.
In the initial chapter i don't really like this story. Same reason as other, too much like canon. But it's only in the initial, so not so much problem.
So far good job. I like it.

This is gay

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Tired to tried

What is so great about this story is that the characters are true to how they were originally portrayed in the official manga/anime, while at the same time different because of the circumstances that you (the author) put them in and changed accordingly. I have only noticed spelling and grammar trouble so far, so you are a good writer.

Loved the fight scene though would've liked a bit more detail. All in all I am enjoying the entire story.

I am seriously enjoying this story and am happy that you completed it. Awesome Job!

I love all stories where Naruto uses his head earlier on and is actually intelligent. Great!

Seems interesting, great so far. I like it.

I love your presentation of Naruto here... great job with his personality. I also like the idea you have in the author's note. Good chapter.

Super beginning chapter. A quick meeting for Naruto and Hinata. I will read on.