Reviews for Legacy of the Rasengan I: Naruto
brutusjr chapter 6 . 12/27/2021
This story is way too much like the original rehash...
Gemini wavin chapter 24 . 9/1/2021
Kakashi literally just gave away narutos element of surprise, his giving the enemy information they could use against his student, they could create counter measures and as naruto doest even know they know of his abilities hid be left to the fishes
Guest chapter 30 . 5/13/2021
I want them to die. They have no right to steal the hard work of naruto ! I wat sakura sasuke et kakashi to be severely punished !
Guest chapter 20 . 5/13/2021
i want kakashi for die.!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/13/2021
i don't like sasuke et sakura attitude. I want that they die.
JerHat chapter 22 . 3/1/2021
Story makes no sense and seems ... I'm not sure inconsistent is the word I'm looking for but it's something along those lines. Half-hearted? Somethingish like that.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2021
First chapter and I like you already
yrlastin chapter 28 . 10/21/2020
Orochi and Kabuto always survives in fanfics seemingly no matter how OP Naruto is. It's getting tiresome
yrlastin chapter 27 . 10/21/2020
Sakura shouldn't give away Naruto's secrets if she hopes to regain his trust
yrlastin chapter 20 . 10/21/2020
Kakashi Sucks ass for teaching Narutos personal jutsu to another without even asking or offering a even trade
Guest chapter 37 . 9/12/2020
Can you please make hinata character liitle stronger a good medical and best kunochi ever . Inovled her more in battle and healing
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2020
You seem to want to make it seem like naruto is smart and he’s hiding behind a mask but the way you wrote it makes naruto seem like an idiot the thinks he’s hiding behind a mask but he’s just an idiot
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2020
I don’t get this — Not quite what I expected…I guess I forgot to tell you but this bath water is seventy degrees. If you continue to fail, you'll become a boiled egg faster than a Hokage."
— is he saying hokages are boiled eggs?
Guest chapter 5 . 6/26/2020
natsuzamaki chapter 34 . 6/18/2020
Earth Curse seal in Japanese is Chi Juin Jutsu. Gaia is Greek for Earth.
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