Xc las cosas se pondran duras ahora mas que la -_- sakura ayudo a negi eso solo ayudara al clan hyuuga a poner sus manos sobre naruto pero bueno buen cap :D como siempre me encanta, saludos desde google traductor

tienes mucha razon con lo que dices en las notas del autor pero loque me enojo mas fue que kakashi falto a su promesa solopor favorecer al uchiha cosa que me enojo mucho en el anime se enfoca mas en sasuke y a los demas... los manda por ahi siempre pense que cumpliria su promesa pero miren de que forma la traiciona -_-*
cuando lei lo que sentia naruto por sus companeros lo apoye tenia razon en sentirse asi no se como eso no paso por su cabeza en el manga aunque sea al principio pero bueno asi es esto xD

DX puto sasuke puto kakashi ese jutsu es de naruto como me cabreo eso de todos los personajes que tenia que aprenderlo tuvo que ser el puto uchiha y llevarse tambien el merito -_- JODER si que estuvo bueno eso, si que lo estuvo gran cap como siempre.

Well, i was reading the author notes and thia is what i thought. Good you don't bash but you better make Naruto outclass that butt without being god-like because it's seriously irritating me... That jerk is a copy-cat and Kakashi deserves to be whacked in the head. Don't kill him, just give him a mental or pysichal punishment. All in all, great chapter

Sasuke should be killed by now... That bastard is seriously irritating me

Wow. Naruto an idea for rasengan? Wow

It was a bit discombobulated feeling with how you tried linking all the different view points. They need to flow better, with actual descriptors or setting up. They felt very disjointed for something that was suppose to follow one after another.

Good luck and keep writing,

Malichite

Nice with using Ebisu as he does seemingly have a lot of info since he WAS training/looking after Konohamaru, but other than a few other stories I never even see him, heh.

Good luck and safe tidings being in the military.

Keep writing when you can,

Malichite

So far this story is looking kinda neat. Definitely needs some work, but like you previously mentioned to me I'll give it some more time/reading before I really get down to the nitty gritty :-P

No idea how Sasuke would know of the Kage Bunshin as no Genin seemed to have knowledge of it before Naruto started spamming it like candy. Though I was always surprised why no one tried actively to learn it, other than to be told they couldn't, which I think one or two of them were told by their sensei's.
I AM glad for the slight revisionist outlook on how things were slightly different. It was nice and not too far fetched.

Looking forward to reading more,

Good luck and keep writing,

Malichite

XD tengo que leer esto en el traducctor pero es grandioso me encanto la broma ojala alguien tome el projeto de traduccir este genial fic pronto!

So this story looks like it could be neat. So far the chapters are WAY too short and there really needs to be more substance, but so far its a good start.

Good luck and keep writing,

Malichite

Wow... Awesome end! I supposed II will be Shippuden? It will be interesting, but I think I gotta take a break xD I don't usually read a story in a day, but this story was just too exciting! Kept me on the edge of my seat!

Whooooo! Is he gonna do something like

Damn, it's hilarious! xD Neji and Kiba fighting over who gets to fight Naruto. Sasuke is quietly fuming that he can't fight Naruto. Oh god ahahahaha! And yay! NaruHinaaaaa! It's so cuuuute

Yep. Kill Kakashi for us. Please. Or atleast make him repentent, that bastard. I can feel Naruto's rage. And make Sasuke announce that it was Naruto's jutsu, otherwise I think everyone would render him infertile. Arrrrgh. So frustrating! The Naruto and Neji fight was awesome though! But eh it kind of got wiped out by the huge wave of rage. Stupid Kakashi, that asshole better pay.