Reviews for Legacy of the Rasengan I: Naruto
Nanashi113 chapter 19 . 3/26/2013
So why didn't Naruto get angrier at Saukra... don;t get me wrong he was pissed...

But to him, his own teammate was trying to steal his hardwork... most likely to give it to his other teammate...

That's a major breach of trust... also probably illegal.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I just read ur first chapter, ur writing is amazing. The description, the effect of all those extra verbs that make the sentense have a whole lot effect to it.
LFG chapter 14 . 3/18/2013
so wait... naruto has a seal now too?
JERUSALEM's Bride chapter 5 . 3/18/2013
whos arashi? is that his dad?
Ermilus chapter 37 . 3/7/2013
Love it
Vince chapter 20 . 2/26/2013
I really like NO LOVE this chapter and chapter 19 with all the drama and action going on, its probably your best chapter/s yet!
REV6Pilot chapter 28 . 2/23/2013
I don't suppose you intende to write the ENTIRE chapter in italics, did you? Might wanna correct that...
willtrytowriteforfreebooks chapter 20 . 2/18/2013
Punish Karachi and kill assume
Guest chapter 35 . 2/5/2013
Holy crap... XXXXXXXL battle scene
Tharosis2442 chapter 37 . 2/3/2013
i completely love how this ended. I also and especially loved watching the characters from the anime become yours without losing the buildings blocks of the character themselves. your characters especially learned and seemed to grow through out your story. it was very impressive and humbling to read at the same time. It was a great story. I look forward with great enthusiasm to the second part of your story and naruto's. after all i've got to know what happens between him and hinata, ne?
Guest chapter 35 . 2/2/2013
Guest chapter 34 . 2/2/2013
Dont write a story to please us. Write a story to please yourself. I will enjoy it better that way.
ReaderNicholas666 chapter 16 . 2/2/2013
Whats great is your story is good. It draws you in just like a good book. What you do wrong is some sentence structure and spelling errors that truthfully dont happen a lot. Good luck with everything and i look forward to reading more chapters.
lugialegend233 chapter 8 . 1/27/2013
YAY! A fanfic where Naruto was not a complete OP when he was beating on Kakashi in the beginning!
mililli chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
I like how you had sakura tied to the post! I love reading her thoughts too haha
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