| Reviews for The Ante |
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   Anamarie Chambers chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Looking good! I loved the wording "the city had forgiven him his trespasses, if only by half." I thought it was very cleverly worded. I also liked how Remy's coming back to see her and she gets stabbed by his card. Very good use of foreshadowing. How often does he end up being a pain in the tuckus? I look forward to your next chapter. ~Anamarie |
| MidnightManic chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 oo! new story! i like it! and all its romy goodness! keep it up, i'm keepin a special eye out for this one! |
| Mykella chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Very very nice, loved the narration and loved the way you've characterize. I have a feeling this will be an excellent fic. Keep up the good work! |
| thegambit23 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 ah finally, a good story with correct grammar to boot. it's about time, hard to find well written stories now. you've got my interest for sure, keep it going! update soon! |
| Rogue181 chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Great first chapter! Update soon! |
| ishandahalf chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 it's only been one chapter, but i'm absolutely loving it so far! unfortunately, it's getting harder and harder to find great fics these days - and this one has proper grammer and spelling and everything! huzzah. ;) so. great start indeed. we haven't seen much of them yet, but i think you're capturing remy and rogue's characters very well. i'm quite curious to see how this plays out - mainly to see how rogue reacts to remy after that whole kidnapping stunt... as much as i love the romy, i'm hoping she'll give him a hard time about it - cuz i certainly wouldn't forgive that whole fiasco easily. but that's just me... and i'm rambling now. the point IS, more please! and fast! |
| enchantedlight chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 great start! update soon! |
| Chica De Los Ojos Cafe chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Very nice first chapter! Enjoyed it lots! Do update soon! Till next chapter! ~Chica~ |
| 41eugoR chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 Interesting start _ Loving how you portrayed Remy. Well hope you update ASAP! |
| PoisonRogue chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 I like it, you got the characters down to a tee so far and it seems to be a good set up you got goin' on. Look forward to the next chapter! |
| quartzorchid chapter 1 . 5/15/2006 you have piqued my intrest dear. it's very well written, and if you don't finish it,i'll hunt you down and... force you to eat marshmellows! lol, it's 330, and i have a lab report to write... toodles! |
| musagirl15 chapter 1 . 5/14/2006 Cool, I love ROMYs.:D |