Reviews for Fourth of May
Lured by the Song of Sirens chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
You really effectively capture the emotion of these characters, and it's stunning. The writing is powerful and just hits the audience with a condensed version of character's emotions and fears from the show. Nicely done.
Danny Longstride chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Redmage2 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
Oh wow, this is a wonderfully thought out story. I really like the perspective and pace of it. I only wish I'd come across it sooner!
Nerica chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
this was so sad...but still it was beautiful, great fic ]
kawaii.meiko chapter 1 . 5/30/2008
Really good!

So sad...

This one-shot moved my heart...

And to think that all I did when watching "Detective Conan" was to laugh and try solving the mysteries...

Ran's feelings never really bothered my mind...

Just now...
Eevee chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
This was beautiful.
psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Very sad. But I applaud you for the well done angst. :D
CSMars chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
OMG, i'm gonna cry now... this is so sad... but one of those rare fics where the characters come alive.

I remember reading a Ranma 1/2 fic where Ranma wakes up and realize everything that has happened since he was 16 (i.e. when the manga started) was all a dream. And all the people he met in his dream (including the girl he has grown to love after so many trials and tribulations) were not real. And the fic deals with his heart-wrenching experience to cope with that fact. I couldn't help but bawl when I read that.

This story gets the same tears out of me. I don't really like Ran because I think her character is so... irrelevant. And that she can't connect to Shinich/Conan like Haibara can. All she does is sit there and widdle her thumbs when she waits for her knight to come and rescue her. But this story was quite heartfelt and moving. Very, very nice.
Basser chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
:O So depressing! But a nice take on the usual 'ten years later' story. I'm usually not so much a fan of the first-person but here you seem to have pulled it off quite well. Lends an air of mystery and loss to the whole thing. Amazing how a Shonen manga can turn out to be so very dark, after a few years. ;)

Defininite favourite!
DarkenedSakura chapter 1 . 5/19/2006
Haha, I read this on livejournal already, but a second review never hurts. Still loving how you did the POV. I think it's my favorite part of the whole thing.

Adding this to faves, and again, great job :D
september rain907 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Like I said in the DC community in LJ, this is really good! Great job on this one! .
FS chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Great story, which makes Shinichi's character seem much deeper and more interesting than in the original version. It was sad to read how Shinichi had grown used to his situation and his new life and "become" Conan while Ran, who cannot forget him and, is still living in the past.
BlackMailer chapter 1 . 5/15/2006

That was so awesome!

feel like I gotta cry now LOL.

Arrgh! I loved it!
dahidendetective chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
Wow... sigh... so beautiful, ur a great writer!
Seelentherapie chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I already read that story on livejournal today. I really liked it :)