|Reviews for Summer Revelation|
| Audrayy chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I thought this was alright. Good spelling and good grammar.
A few suggestion's though, by calling Mrs Weasley Molly. It made it quite confusing and harder to follow, also why would Mrs Weasley assume that Fred was gay: "So who is he?" Prodded Molly.
Also the story wasn't that smooth, it went from one subject to the other, which is also quite annoying to follow. Also, I'm a little shocked at how passive Ginny was to Fred and George's relationship, i know that if anyone saw their twin brothers getting it on they would be a bit shocked. But as you explained they were made for each other which was a nice touch. I did enjoy this story, just a few things you should improve on.
This is not a flame or anything, just a helping hand i guess. But, as i said this story is good. I like the the plot and idea.
| Lovedward48 chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Woah! Awesome! I love it! The way you wrote it that's just exactly how I love it! But tell me...how did Molly know it was a he and not a she when she asked who Fred had fallen in love with? Whatever, I still love it!
| UK All The Way chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
SQUE! I love Fred and George in NB, so naturally, I LOVE this! ::happydance::