Reviews for Why Didn't You Say?
Rachel Taylor chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
Hey lovely,

You know I love this one. I remeber it cos it's so haunting! This is very well written and it stays with you. This oneshot would make a fantasic animation or movie clip.

Tips for improvement? Proof read again, it makes the story flow so much better!

Love you lots,

Rachel

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Tsumi-Amethyst chapter 1 . 10/25/2006
Nice. I enjoyed the connection you wrote between them when Zell cuts himself. Although not very descriptive, it was still a good read. Thanks for sharing it with us.
QueenAdreena chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I was skeptical at first, but the ending did indeed make me think. Often things left unsaid can cause unnecessary torment, and alot of worthless thinking. I do feel that you could've made it much better, and longer, if you'd added more description, and in depth characterisations. Not bad.
LilithIllyria chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
OMH! You made me fucking cry! But it's a good story, as you can see from the tears. keep it up!
Zaeris chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
That was so sad, you did a great job of bringing the audience right into the story and the ending was superb. But, OMG it was so sad (wipes tears).

-ZE
deletetjhisplease chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
It ended a bit too quickly, but it never took away from my loving this angsty fic.