Reviews for All In, But Not Yet Over part 3
angelwings8 look me up chapter 1 . 5/23/2011

I love that it was "almost" smiling, that he did not suddenly become thrilled with life or somebody that he is not, but rather that he simply became more like himself with her...more accepting of the person that he remains, even with her then.

LOVE this-
Gothic Butterfly chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
WAh! That was too short!
ANoRDaE chapter 1 . 5/23/2006


I think I need a cold shower now.

Seriously, that was fantastically written. I hope you keep writing, I'm not talking about this story, but just any story in general. You're amazing.
jenloveshouse chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
oo i just read all 3 parts. That was brilliant and hot. The third part was my favourite.I especially loved the ending-

, and whispered to him how happy he’d made her, and had completely understood that his self-conscious mutterings were meant to tell her exactly the same thing.
phantom.professional chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
That was just pure greatness. You're such a wonderful writer. You should write real no kidding novels. Keep writing- Or are you finished?
enots chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Where is a defibrilator when you need one? This needs a warning its so hot. Congrats.
nicola chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
good god you sure know what to give your readers that was so god damm hot without being over the top.

well done

and more chapters though its to good