Reviews for Angel in the Battle
Guest chapter 14 . 7/4/2014
fghjkl;
Guest chapter 7 . 7/3/2014
im left handed to
Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2014
i love what your writing, but pit can't fly on his own. when he can fly, he can't control where he is going, he can glide tho. don't get me wrong i love what your writing. its just a small nitpick i have when reading(ether its pit flying at will or someone using links sword, but only if its the master sword)if this makes you mad, im sorry that is not my intentions
Pizzadone chapter 11 . 9/26/2013
You just HAD to go there.

Pit: "Lol babies are born in clouds hurr durr"

Roy: "NOPENOPENOPENOPE"

Samus: "I LIKE TALKIN BOUT THIS." (Eye twitch)

Marth: Second the notion!

Me: THERE'S SOMETHING WRONG HERE.

Crazy: ITsBETteR WiTh Me In EvErYThIng!
skydancing dragon chapter 16 . 7/5/2013
I think outside of the box lol
Dragonov chapter 15 . 3/1/2013
Didn't you mean to put romance in the credits?
Jetzul chapter 20 . 1/14/2013
READ IT ALL!

So overall review...To be honest, I don't really know what to make out of this fanfic. The beggining was a bit slow, and the end was disappointing.

BUT THE MIDDLE WAS AWESOME! I loved how you made Crazy Hand, just perfect. And Master Hand is really in his role.
The ZeldaxLink moments were great, and Pit's innocence was perfectly well written. And Roy who is trying to protect it.
Roy...I don't know what to think of him. He's hilarious, but the RoyxSamus scared me...it scarred me for life. Seriously.

So yeah...I don't know what to make of this. I guess it's an average story with its ups and downs.

But in this critical review, let me tell you, this fanfic was really worth my time.
deidaraawesomeness chapter 25 . 7/13/2011
cool story! you're a great writer!
IkutosGirl chapter 25 . 1/4/2010
Please please PLEASE Tell me that you have another story that has a Pit pairing in it! I think you're a great writer and I would love to see that come from you! :D

Great story btw! I LUVED IT!
Nintendo Dork chapter 22 . 2/14/2009
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Nintendo Dork chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
This is still the greatest story EVER! (Fans) So if you want a sequel, send a message to Cowpie Surprise and tell her to update!
Homely chapter 25 . 1/24/2009
Ah, I read this story a while ago but I don't believe I ever reviewed.

This is one of my favorite stories... I love it so much, really. And even though Pit doesn't end up with Samus I still love that they're friends. I also liked Roy a lot!

You did a great job! :D
Nintendo Dork chapter 25 . 1/3/2009
Best story EVER. I demand a sequel!
Mitsuko-chan chapter 25 . 8/16/2008
All I can say is... WOW.

That was one of the best fanfics I've ever read.
Singe Grin chapter 1 . 8/1/2008
Just forgot to add my to my Fave list
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