WHAT!

who could you make Orochimaru Narutos brother?

that horrible!

(but other than that i love it!)

XD

I LOVE IT!

Heheh, had to get that out of my system before I can say anything else.

First of all, your Kiba is... I can't come up with anything that would describe his awesomeness, I love him, he's amazing.

The other guys are super cute too and your writing style... Same thing as with Kiba, I can't even describe how great it is. I haven't really paid much attention to men in uniforms before, but now I'm in love with firemen. (At least as long as they look like Gaara and Neji and Kiba and Naruto and... Yeah, I believe you get the picture ;) )

I'm running out of words, I'm too stunned, but I have to say that I loved the idea, it was super great! The only things that bothered me were how fast Naruto always got up after getting molested and raped by Itachi. I missed angst :p And how you but a dot between the question mark and exclamation mark, it felt weird, but after a while you get used to it. There could have also been more about Sai, you caught my interest when there was a mention about him being violent. (I don't know why I like torturing Naruto, I can't help it! It's just the way I am, I guess... But he always has someone to make it all better, so isn't it alright to hurt him a little? Make him angst a little? Alright I'll shut up.)

Oh and as you probably can see from somewhere I added this to my favourites.

You sure are a magnificent author, so keep up the good work! Thank you for writing this fic!

Nice . I can really identify with the Naruto in this story, because I am very short and look MUCH younger than my age too.

Omg! I loooove this story so much! srsly! the prank war and all and the stupid sasuke who doesnt know himself D you dummy, of course you are attracted to naruto.

tho, i must say that i was a little dissapointed that Naruto kinda lose the prank war : i mean he is like the prank king : hmh!

poor konohamaru XD AAW! A HAPPY ENDING! I LOVE THOSE THE MOSTTTT 33

Kyaaaaaaa~!3 i really loved this fic

it make me laugh sooo much xD kya kya kya

I LOVE YOU ! this was awesome!

haha okay i have calmed down.

i really love your writing style, it's fun to read.

Thank you for taking time to write fics.

:)

'"All right!" Genma jumped to his feet, both fists raised in the air. "You're Yo motto from now on."

"It's-it's Yamato. Ya. Ma. To." Yamato enunciated.

"Yeah, yeah, whatever, tomato." Genma waved his hand at him.'

Okay, I'm not done reading this story yet, but I just have to say this, that was fucking. Priceless XD "Yeah, yeah, whatever, tomato." *dies out of laughter*

Hey, I see a lot of super positive reviews, so i not sure you would appreciated mine, but anyways. I really love your writing style and the plot is good and well researched - it is always interesting to get an insight into new life style. The major inconsistency for me was how you describe the firefighters all brave and buff manly man (although gay)and then you have Naruto end up a total girl, no more mature than 15 years old. He cries, wimpers and faints waiting for Sasuke to save him. Aside from having one comparably small revenge in response to Sasuke's constant pranks, Naruto couldn't stand for himself even once, while claiming to be independent relying on himself for money and such. I guess you were really writing a girl's character in man's form. Hm... anywayz, thanks for the story! Keep it up! Hope someday to read a story written by you with Naruto's character closer to the one portrayed in the manga: always determined and able to stand for himself in situations where all other fail :))

I just read Roommates and Blood and Tears in the last 3 days therefore upon reading this summary : "Which of the two brothers will come out on top..." I have to say it: "I lost." :)

*cries* You are a cruel, cruel woman. I actually cried when I thought Naruto died, a world without Naruto-kun is a world without pocky! Could you imagine how terrible it would be? Like the dark ages come again! *gives pocky* You, while being cruel but amazing, are a brilliant author! You had me giggling insanely(at 4AM, I think I freaked my dogs out), clutching my racing heart(I sound like a cheesy romance novel), and bouncing in place with a combo of the other two! Oh, can't forget the dramatic gasps that seemed determined to escape LOL. Your writing style has me hooked! Your plot was very very VERY original, and I loved it _ Genma the brilliant pervert (I love him, truly.), and all the little touches of humour that comes along with him, I.e;anything sex related, was perfect for the story! You balanced all aspects of a good story perfectly! *Gives leash with Kiba attached* Thanks for putting so much time and effort into this, and all your other fics! I've been stuck home really sick for 5 weeks now with nothing to do but read, sleep and listen to music. Your fic was so refreshing! A breath of fresh air in a fire! Fire, hot, SasuNaru, Genma. Wow. My mind seems to be stuck on hot guys right now, bookie that I'm complaining! You are awesome! I'll cut my rambles off now *scratches head sheepishly* Thanks again!

Hey! So, i'm actualy re-reading this story and it's STILL one of my absolute favorites _

I was SO going to kill you in chapt. 19! Damn, only a little part of me said, "Calm down, read the next chapter first!" And I almost cried.. I've read Creatures of the Night, and you killed a lot!

I love your work! Keep it up, and please update Follow The Leader! D:

awesome chapter! lol kitty genma

haha im so slow...i just realized team 7, station seven. duh!

I loved this story and all its angst/humor, im really glad naruto didnt die best thing ever!

lol xD

Gemna is like *runs* *hugRAPES Konohamaru* CAN I KEEP HIM, I COUDLN'T HAVE THE LAST ONE D:

me: SO... I think that if you talk so lightly about Na-Na-chan... he's still alive :D

And probably being screwed by Sasuke in the dhowers right now. lol.

No, I think Sasuke became a paramedic by now

-reads on- (yes, I'm typing this while reading, so that I don't forget anything afterwards)

BY THE WAY, GENMA, NO, YOU CAN'T HAVE HIM! »:C

-/really/ reads on xD-

All the others better not be this crazy, /that's/ for sure! ... I'm afraid... you'll be heavily disappointed "

..

"Isn't the Captain going to be mad that two firefighters are reading what I can only assume is porn in his office?"

xD too bad for you, 'hamaru-kun, that /IS/ the captian xD

..

OH GOD... SASUKE DOESN'T SEEM HAPPY O.O

Maybe Naruto /is/...

*shakes head violently* (in a chibi way)

NO! I WON'T BELIEVE THAT!

He's really ill, or in a coma TT

HE'S. NOT. DEAD!#! %#& $#$# D:

..

And who could blame him after what happened with the last newcomer?

TELL ME WHAT HAPPENED ALREADY, *#%&!#& *&u! #&

D:

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the blond idiot standing in it

(prepare for fangirl scream)

NARUTOOOO! :DDDD (and that like REALLY loud xd)

(I /ACTUALLY/ squealed his name out loud ")

(I THINK THEY'RE GOING TO FIGHT AND THEN MAKE OUT AND SHOK 'HAMARU-KUN X3

KYAA! :D)

..

And then, to Konohamaru's complete horror,

...YEESSS ? :DD

MAKE-OUT?

:D

PLEASE? :D

..

Sasuke grabbed Naruto—and started kissing him.

YATTAAAAAAAAAA! :D

I KNEW IT

HALLELUJAH!#%& #$ 4 :D

..

HOLY SHIT O.O

NARUTO BLEEDING LIKE THAT...

*strangles itachi (NO, HE DOESN'T DESERVE A CAPITAL 'I' »:C)*

..

rofl!

I thought /NARUTO/ would be nice to 'hamaru-kun xD

since he knows how it is to be a newbie :P

rofl.

but it's still 120% Na-Na-chan to do that, lol.

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"He's so overprotective of me it's not even funny. Right, bastard?" He smirked at his lover.

HEHEHE X3 KAWAII!

"Shut up, moron."

AWWWH :whole bunch of hearts:

HE LOVES HIM :heart:

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"Poor guy? He gets to fuck Naruto every night. How does that make him a 'poor guy'?"

ROFL, WAY TO SCARE 'HAMARU-KUN, YOU FUCKTARD XDD rofl. :P

..

rofl xD

safer to have genma have coffee? xD

you guys might want to swich him over to caffeine-free coffee though :P (secretly ofc. xD)

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"No! My black, heavenly goodness!"

ROFL XD

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"I won't tell Sasuke that you told me in detail how cute he looked when he slept."

XD awwhhiii

but... isn't Sasuke like.. right there? able to hear what he said? :3

AND I WANT A PICTURE, NARUTO! NOW :D

in poster-format :3

..

"But then who will molest you in the shower?"

"Sasuke."

of course :D who else? :D

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The raven grabbed his face and kissed him deeply before letting him go.

*tingles in stomach*

so cute..

so romantic..

so protective...

*nosebleed*

...

"Watch me."

rofl, that reminded me of a song going 'WATCH ME, WATCH ME BUUUURRRNNN' xD

me: rather not, unless its burning in hornyness xD rofl.

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As Medic Eight passed a grocery store, Sasuke contemplated how many times he could make Naruto cum that night if he got all the necessary props.

AHHAHAHAHAHA

OMG

AWESOME

I LOVE IT

GREAT ENDING! :D

This story is definitely in my top 10, on a shared first place with ... the roommates-stories xD and probably some others.

hehe, lovely, thanks for writing a nice story like this! :D I will definitely read your other stories too :3

~Love,

Yentl

ROFL, MY LITTLE PERVY :heart:

Sasuke's thoughrs: what happened? And why wasn't Naruto here to give him head? D:

Me: :roflroflrofl: DUDE! you have like 18 stiches, and the only thing you can think of is a blond boy giving you head? xD

Sasuke: NOW JUST /A/ BLOND BOY! /THE/ BLOND BOY! *fumes* WHERE IS HE?

Me: o_o don't look at me. I didn't do it :D

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"Screw the questions, go find him!"

*AWWHS* poor Sasuke D: *wants to hug but can't reaach.. AGAIN T.T* *makes meep-noise*

..

you know... /WANTS/ him...

me: O_O I KNOW, I KNOW, IT'S S... SEYHMFHSEF GNSDHGBASE #r% b3NTUS GHNSJGNWJ!~!$ D:

LIKE

LIKE

T.T

DUDE

LIKE

FUCK D:

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*sasuke throws water at TV*

random nurse: HEY, THOSE THINGS ARE EXPENSIVE YOU KNOW! D:

sasuke: FUCK OFF! %r&#%&$#& # *throws more water*

nurse: AAAH SECURITY, SECURITY D:

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-phone call-

me: HOLY SHIT SDMGBSD FT VNACSEZ Bc~#! $~! bt #h$*!$w#* %$*%$& #$& #$%$% *#% qe$ #$& # # #$ F SFGSGBASD

AAAAAAAAHH! D:

GET OFF HIM YOU FREAK

LET HIM GO!

... by the way.. *imagines*

*ita raping naru*

hey, lets call the hospital :D

*WHILE RAPING dials hospital number*

*asks for sasuke*

(naruto doesn't scream for help and itachi doesnt sound suspicious at all, moaning and stuff -.-")

*just gets sasuke on the phone*

LIKE WTH, HOW FUCKING DUMB ARE THOSE PEOPLE # # # #* #$r h %!#$ gsfjhsae~! ! ! D:«

...

"Just you and me, now, Itachi. You haven't won yet."

GO SASUKE GO SASUKE GO SMASH THAT GUYS HEAD UP TIL HE CAN NO LONGER BREATHE TALK OR EVEN THINK!% ##%$

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NOO!1

NARUTOOOOOOO! NARUTOOOOOOOOOOOO! NARUTOOOF AFN SJKG RTGV385GV16!$%%!#!

YOU CANT DIE

NO NO NO NONOOOO

NARUTOOOOO

NOOOOOOOO T.T

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THIS IS MY LONGEST REVIEW ON THIS STORY SO FAR :D *proud* not my longest of all time though xD

I want to read on so i dont have the patience to type more, but I still thought you deserved a long review "