|Reviews for Poor William|
| Charlie Snipe chapter 1 . 7/28/2006
I love the series Girlfriends and I loved your story. It's really good I just wished you could have elaborated the story more. This seems like an outline and I think it would be awesome if you put in some conversation between the girls, since that is what they are really good at.
| brokenchair chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Was this a story? The idea is good but its more like a synops of an new episode. Please make sure to check your spelling and tense agrement.
Good job, watch out for little mistakes though.