Reviews for Why Can't You Stay?
TanksAndHeals chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
so cute

very well done
Mariegurl chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
this was an awesome one shot. I think u should continue it and make it into a longer story!
nelly04 chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
ah...if only it happened that way..*sigh*...well at least we do no he picked her up and put her on the bench..rite?
brightfairy8 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
aw...that was a nice scene -winks-
UchihaBlossom984 chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
That was so sad! It was so romantic when they kissed though!_

I liked the last line that Sasuke was thinking, but restoring his clan isn't the only reason he wants to be with Sakura.:)

All in all, I loved it! You should write a sequel to this!
kunoichixakura chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
thats so sad. god. he just has to think that, right? even as his last thought. well, that was really great.
ViOlEt-KaT chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
that's the last thought he leaves with? that perv... ne way it was pretty good keep up the good work and... what happened to "smile for me" and "instant message?" i've been waiting for so long... (wails)
Tiger5913 chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Haha, in a way, that last line was funny, but in another way, it's kind of sad... Restoring his clan is not the only reason that he wants to be with Sakura, right? o.o
Vanity-chan chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Don’t worry, Sakura, he thought as if she could hear him. I’ll have to restore my clan someday. - For some reason, I laughed at this... it sounded so... Sasuke. And it was nice of him to think that he could only have kids with Sakura. HAHA. I wonder how Sakura could've replied to that if he said that aloud. Well, there could be possible chances of her saying yes or no, right?

Anyway, this is really nice and sweet. Just loved the kissing scene. Romantic is the word for it (what an obvious thing to say, ne?).


-strictly ext only-
Glass Orchid chapter 1 . 5/14/2007

That was so... ow-ie.

But I like it, absolutely love the the ending even

though it's sad ending...
Red Shagging Couch chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
Dying Sakura chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
o.O. What a cue oneshot! I like the last line that Sasuke said:

Don’t worry, Sakura, he thought as if she could hear him. I’ll have to restore my clan someday.

Thi is one of the sweetest onshots I've read! You should make another one where he comes back a couple of years later! That'd be awesome!
richgirlfore chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
it's incredible how you could turn that scene into a romantic scene. (tears of joy) although he had to leave, at least sakura had a goal and hope.
Georgina Summer chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
that was very touchy...:( Ilove your story...
DreamsXReality chapter 1 . 3/9/2007
That was so..romantic, and emotional, and awesome!
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