|Reviews for Caged Fox|
| serroxley chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
| Rothwell chapter 3 . 7/26/2012
The way you show speech is fucking annoying... ""Well Naruto/Old-Man/Kit" he said "blablabla"" - this has to be the case with 80% of all sentences. If you're talking with someone, you don't say their name at the beginning of every sentence. Maybe to start the conversation but not throughout it. Also, using well over and over just makes it even more annoying. The constant interruption of "he said" in the middle/start of sentences furthers the annoyance... really, it's enough to make me want to stop reading, but I won't just to see if you stop using this annoying speech pattern...
| uchiha isuke chapter 23 . 11/15/2011
why do they want a sex scene so badly if they are reading it for lemons go read a lemon chronicle or something if they are reading it for the plotline then continue reading and you will probably put one in there when you bloody well feel like it
| uchiha isuke chapter 18 . 11/15/2011
well i didnt see that coming he had a chance to kill naruto while he was sleeping earlier why didnt he just take that?
| uchiha isuke chapter 17 . 11/15/2011
jiraiya was with naruto on his training trip so i can half understand why they didnt go for naruto but all they would need is 4 members at most to beat jiraiya
| uchiha isuke chapter 12 . 11/15/2011
for some reason i feel naruto isnt going to like those interesting side effects anyway on a side note i have a hunch that the kid could be a jynchuriki or part demon or something like that but i dont think it matters since it would have been explained in the newer chapter now anyway
| uchiha isuke chapter 8 . 11/15/2011
you know you just pissed several perverts off right then dont you me on the other hand it just made me laugh
| uchiha isuke chapter 4 . 11/15/2011
poor poor naruto.
(voice in back of mind)
| The Frequent Mis-speller chapter 5 . 6/7/2011
"...and people probably hate me because I tend to be blunt."
...But your name is General Bad-'axe', so shouldn't you be quite sharp?
Just wanted to crack a joke, sorry.
And for the story, I like it, and while normally whenever I review (which I don't do often) I'll do an extensive bit on my opinion or whatever, I just started reading this chapter in the morning, so my mind is a little foggy over details. I can, however, say with certainty that I like the story.
Keep up the good work General!
| Dragunav chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
you lost me with the tail...hate the stories where he gets a freaking TAIL!
| Impstar chapter 25 . 4/25/2011
This story is a very good one. It is well developed, and has few plot holes. One of the plot holes that I did notice was with Karen (or whatever the name of the boy who tried to kill Naruto was). He had plenty of opportunities to kill Naruto (like when Naruto was sleeping), so why didn't he take them? Not wanting to die from those around him after the deed would be one, but it doesn't seem like a reason he would use. Please update again soon.
| Magus Neon chapter 25 . 1/10/2011
Ten-hut! General on Deck!
Seriously though, I am blown away by your work thus far. Let it be known that I have actually only made it to chapter 21, but reviews on current chapters tend to get a response easier. I have only one question. Why is Chakra yellow in this fic? Normally chakra is shown as blue. If you would PM me with an answer, even if it is just a redirect to a chapter where you already explained your reason, just in case I missed it, I would greatly appreciate the effort.
Keep up the good work,
Zenith010, Servant of Chaos
| KitsuneNoYomeiri chapter 24 . 6/27/2010
okay. its official. this chapter has made me hate you. why? I RAN OUT OF CHAPTERS D: AND ITS THE PERFECT CLIFFHANGER! i dont know to give you an award or find you and kick you in the shin.
| KitsuneNoYomeiri chapter 20 . 6/22/2010
OH MY GOD! HAPPOSAI DRANK THE ELIXIR OF YOUTH AND GOT TALLER! AND GREW HIS HAIR OUT! AND STOPPED STEALING PANTIES AND BRAS! AND IS WRITING A SMUT NOVEL! AND IS NOW A POWERFUL NINJA! AND A SAGE! AND AFFILIATED WITH TOADS WHICH IS PROBABLY WHERE HE GOT THE WART ON HIS NOSE! AND CRIED HIS EYES OUT WHEN HE NOTICED HE WOULD NEVER SEE RANKO AGAIN! GIVING HIM RED TEAR-STAINS! AND HE CHANGED HIS NAME! TO THE GALLANT JIRAIYA!
is that who the white-haired man is?
but yeah. funny. should seriously consider visiting a head doctor and getting a checkup if you read fanfiction and cant recognize this old man
| yroc1234 chapter 24 . 6/13/2010
Very good to see your back man. I thought this fanfiction was gone and was never going to come back, after all it was 2 years. I hope things go well in Afghanistan.