Reviews for The Dopplebeater Defense
origin-of-promise chapter 7 . 9/7/2006
I just read chap 6 as well, so here goes.

This is great. Not many words to explain how much I love your style. And the slash. I want more kissing! Haha, just kidding. It's so bittersweet and mysterious at the same time-this fic keeps me guessing, and I really like that. You have such vivd personalities in the characters-congrats!

Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to what happens next!


thishasbeenabanadoned chapter 7 . 9/6/2006
That was excellent! And so sad. and yes. well done. *applauds you*
thishasbeenabanadoned chapter 6 . 9/1/2006
This is excellent! I look forward to seeing more (I am just assuming there will be more because it is FANBLOODYTASTIC)and yeah... look! a clock!
Eric and Derek chapter 5 . 6/1/2006
Grr! I HATE Tonks! Well, I did ever since she STOLE our beloved Moony in the 6th book! (Dammit, Rowling! Couldn't you have killed her off instead of Sirius?) Well, there are no more chapters as of yet *looks around, lost* I miss it already! Please update soon! This is too good not to! ~Cyraxis
Eric and Derek chapter 4 . 6/1/2006
Heheh! Sweet! I can't imagine Moony getting drunk! Lol! And I loved that line near the end *finds it* “It’s just that I know it’s been fourteen years, but it feels like five minutes, and – Merlin, Padfoot! How do that with your eyebrow?” Hah, that'll have me smiling for days! (I'm easy to please! Lol!) ~Cyraxis
Eric and Derek chapter 3 . 6/1/2006
Wow, this is REALLY good! I'm glad you haven't deleted it, as t'would be a terrible waste of shounen-ai and good writing! Keep it up! ~Cyraxis
Eric and Derek chapter 2 . 6/1/2006
Aww, poor Sirius! I LOVE this pairing, and you've done it justice! This rocks! ~Cyraxis
Eric and Derek chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
Heh, 'you may NOT check out Sirius Black'. Made me laugh! This looks good! I'll read the rest now! (I'll probably review the other chapters, because I'm feeling cheery! ~Cyraxis
origin-of-promise chapter 5 . 6/1/2006
heehee, i like. but it's sad when they fight :( good personality you've put in everyone! lol please write more!
origin-of-promise chapter 4 . 5/27/2006
Okay, I honestly can't keep saying over and over again how good it is; I've used up all the words already! lol but I absolutely love it. Maybe it's the style, or the slash, or both, but all the same, it's awesome. :) I was a little confused...are there 2 chaps there by mistake? and when you switched to present from past tense, was it supposed to be real, him not remembering now, and all the other chaps were him remembering? haha sorry for asking so many questions. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
origin-of-promise chapter 3 . 5/22/2006
Ohh, please don't delete it! It's so good! I love it, every single bit of it, most especially the slash. Please update? Pretty please with a cherry on top? Or if you don't like cherries, whipped cream and chocolate syrup? Okay, I'm shutting up now, lol, I think you get the point. :-D

origin-of-promise chapter 2 . 5/22/2006
M, good! This is fantastic. Extremely creative (I'd never think of something like this lol). Must read more...
Jen chapter 3 . 5/22/2006
This is such a fantastic fanfiction. Its so raw. I love itespecially the way this chapter ended.

You really deserve a lot more credit. Keep it up!
origin-of-promise chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
Ooh, this is interesting. I like. I like alot, esp the idea of Remus and Sirius together. Mwahaha. Yeah so please write more? I also like the 2nd person POV, it's not common so it's a treat to read something in it. Later!
Konnie chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
Hey, that's a promising start. Will you make me wait terribly for an update?
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