Reviews for Shanks Didn't Save Luffy
long Liv D. King chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
This like actually made me cry don't worry that's a good thing. I'm that girl the one you sit across from in history class and noticed they are caring as they read the sad parts of history but this, this was touching
amazon Pen chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
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dragonball256 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Oh wow this is great, it looks like Shanks had that horrible nightmare after he passed out. Thankfully it didn't happen
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
Aww this is such a sweet/cute story! :'3
la troololololol chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
moi j'en est une pareille mais le fantômes de luffy étais de devant le sable chaud et il lui disait qu'il étais triste de le voir comme sa depuis le paradis ...
Pocky0523 chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
Oh this is sad, you made me cry. I'm happy Luffy didn't die. Thank you.
Only If You Wish It chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Beautifully down. Absolute tear-jerker. I love it. And wow I love Shanks. Loved how you wrote this, too!
Crazed King chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Awwww
Celeste D. Lilica chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
I loved it! In the middle I started crying becuase I couldn't hold my tears back any longer. But at the end I was like, "THANK GOD IT WASN'T REAL!"
Gcatthewonderful chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
yay!my favorite character didnt die!
Butterfree chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
And I must say you handled that really well! I had a huge sad smile on my face by the end just because I was so happy for Shanks. Great job on the ending!

Though I hear when someone dies and you're depressed, time passes by pretty slowly. I think you could've delved deeper into Shanks' thoughts in order to express that slowing. His actions were perfect but the thoughts that went with them were just a tad short. Still, loved the story!

CupidKirby
Nekoi Kurona chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
That was so cute and adorable! Admittedly, halfway through the story I started crying and thought that Luffy really did die. Like thank goodness, I agree that losing an arm is better than losing a kid. Although Shanks acts tough when he's not drunk and silly, I can totally imagine him breaking down like that for Luffy. They're like father and son; their interaction is really cute which adds to my love for your story.
Everythinganime14 chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
OMG I LOVED THE ENDING. I was crying but then I found out Luffy was alive. YAAAAY!
AchievingKitKat chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
That had me in tears...t'was beautifully done. ')

Kaitaru

XxxXxxX

(Shanks)
Ancantsia chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Aww that was such a sweet ending I loved it! Thanks for writing! 3
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