Reviews for Legend of Tayuna
ibuberu chapter 4 . 12/21/2006
Yup, I like how the way the story is going so far, not finding it boring, though the chapters could be a tad longer.. The description has improved since the last time I've read this. But I find that sometimes, you rush the dialogue a bit. The battle looked a bit rushed too, even if it was quite lengthy. This's however, just my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
ibuberu chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
The plot is quite interesting, very different from those cheery 'start of a trainer's journey' sort of thing, which is good, I've read much too much of those types already.. XD

The fact that only boys can be trainers is also quite unique, though I rememeber when the earlier game versions only let you play as a boy! XP

The vocabulary you use is not too much and not too little, just right. I find that if one uses too much fanciful words, it messes up the writing. Though this seemed a tad on the short side... Still, nice piece of work!
pokebunny chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
cool, keep it up!
neogirl7900 chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
HI!

Wow, I like your story so far. Around what time period does this take place and if so, what country,if any, is it modeled off?

So... you want boy OCs to use, eh? I'll send you some of my own if I can think of any...

Anyway, I like it a lot so far.

Keep it up!

-Lizzie