|Reviews for Legend of Tayuna|
| ibuberu chapter 4 . 12/21/2006
Yup, I like how the way the story is going so far, not finding it boring, though the chapters could be a tad longer.. The description has improved since the last time I've read this. But I find that sometimes, you rush the dialogue a bit. The battle looked a bit rushed too, even if it was quite lengthy. This's however, just my opinion. Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
| ibuberu chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
The plot is quite interesting, very different from those cheery 'start of a trainer's journey' sort of thing, which is good, I've read much too much of those types already.. XD
The fact that only boys can be trainers is also quite unique, though I rememeber when the earlier game versions only let you play as a boy! XP
The vocabulary you use is not too much and not too little, just right. I find that if one uses too much fanciful words, it messes up the writing. Though this seemed a tad on the short side... Still, nice piece of work!
| pokebunny chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
cool, keep it up!