Reviews for Kunoichi Marmalade
socialgirl378 chapter 3 . 3/6/2015
This is very impressive! This is my first time reading a story that's a bit sexualized, and I actually enjoyed it. Not too much though. I have a couple of song ideas that you should do or I could do it myself. One is having Hinata feat. Naruto do "Dark Horse" by Katy Perry, Naruto, Sasuke, and the other Rookie Twelve males do this funky song by Bruno Mars and Mark Ronson. Sucks I forgot the name. Also, have Ino and Tenten sing "Fancy".
CrisStarTina chapter 3 . 11/9/2012
*growls* dang Sakura does fit very well with being Shakira moving those hips ;)
Gstar391 chapter 3 . 1/1/2012

...Lucky bastard.
mysterysuperman chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
SddR chapter 3 . 5/15/2011
That was sooo good maybe we could hav Sakura, Anko, Kureini and Tsunade dancing with Naruto and the song could be Katy Perry Hot n cold and maybe another one could be of team 12 and its a fight against boys and girls to see if the boys rule or not and to see if the boys are hotter then Naruto but it doesn't happen! Hope you take my idea and if u need any help with anymore just email me! I'm willing to help!
Hyloch chapter 3 . 5/9/2011
I Wants MORE! Go job!
raw666 chapter 3 . 1/6/2011
Can the next one be an alliance where Hinata, Shion (priestess) and/or Hanabi (last one debatable) throw caution to the wind and go wild with Naruto on stage under fear of losing him.

Also, when the guys corner Naruto and ask what he got they don't, he remark, "I have manly, dad ass looks instead of girly looks or boring looks. I have happy, loving personality instead of a cold personality or don't care one. I have a sad story of having no one that love me growing up and is now looking for love and have a loving family. And Finally, I have a great voice that will haply dominate or support the woman that dance with me."
LordLoverDuck chapter 3 . 5/18/2010
i like this fic :D

update as soon as you can please
puffdadder chapter 3 . 3/2/2010
with the way they're going, he's going to sing how to save a life. lol. good story as usual. *cough*and come back to narufanfiction*cough*
deathsilver chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
hope you do another chapter
lazymanzzz chapter 3 . 11/11/2009
try using into the night form carlos santana make the girls go even crazier for naruto
Guest chapter 3 . 10/25/2009
awesome story but you need to update!
byakko no inu yokai chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
how about naruto and the rockie twelve boy sing goin down by linken park and executioners in the clam clam.


NuitTombee chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
I love how you integrated the songs into the stories. Plus it gave me three songs that I had forgotten about to listen to again. I especially like the 'Livin La Vida Konoha' verson when he got Kurenai. You just had to bring Sakura in didn't you.

*foxy grin*
Violett.Skylight chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
You should have Sasuke finally do something! Hahaha. I was thinking maybe the song "Situations" by Escape the Fate. Kinda has the theme you have in your story.
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