Reviews for Next of Kin
Triscribe chapter 1 . 11/15
HA! Good for Anakin.
Virodeil chapter 1 . 11/10
I'm happy I decided to peek into this story. I love it. It was entirely possible, probable, and... well... enticing. Could you please make a continuation of this? It was so nicely done and the thought behind it was new (to me) in this fandom! I always felt the Lars were uneasy of Obi-Wan for the basis of family affairs, but nobody ever wrote such a story, and here you did. It's great! (Hahaha. I'm sounding like a sugar-dosed eight-year-old now...)
Desperately hoping for a continuation, and hunting for more, now. :)
lielielie chapter 1 . 9/3
Loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
nice. I want more!
Asj Johnson chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
Heh. That last scene is funny. Ben has no idea what just happened.
Love and Rock Music chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Wow! I love this. I would have liked to see more of what Luke and Vader were saying to each other though, and especially for Luke to ask to hear about his mother ;)
Pokemonfan1235 chapter 1 . 11/18/2013
It seems to me that Owen is a little mad at Obi Wan for lying about the way Anakin died or ' disappeared. '
Blaze chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
I loved this! It was cute and fluffy, but realistic at the same time. Please write a sequel or continue it!
CloudyDream chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
This was freakin awesome. Well done!
kioku7 chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Okay, I officially love this.
Ocne chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Lovely story. Good job depicting Anakin inside Vader's form.

But that ending...

"I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask you to leave. We don't want you coming around here anymore."

He was astonished, and caught completely off guard. "But... but what about Luke ? You need my help."

"We don't want your help," Owen said."You see, the boy has family. We'll all take care of him. That's what families do."

I can understand Owen's belief that one shouldn't get involved in anything organized or political. But to trust a Sith over a Jedi? Hmmm.

Thank you for sharing!
Imperial Dragon chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
It's always great to read a story that contains Beru.
Jelp chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
The image of Vader sobbing as he held Luke was very profound. No doubt a moment of both sadness and joy at having his son lost and found. Touching oneshot. ~ Jelp
Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010

Woah, it's so sweet and full of love...Family love...

The Jedi was (quite) wrong to separate the child from his parents...

At least now Luke will be taken care of properly...By his Uncle, Auntie and most importantly, his Father...

Like the story...

Take care...
Coriandergirl chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This is a very touching, emotional story. I especially felt moved by the secondhand scenes between Luke and Vader. However, it seems several words and phrases have been lost throughout. I urge you to please go over it and edit, or enlist in a beta. The plot is so wonderful, I'd hate to have it remain forever marred.
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