|Reviews for Policy of Truth|
| VAwitch chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Looks good. Hope to see more soon.
Interesting angle of Prime having a child, but not necessarily "with" Elita.
| Lady Razorsharp chapter 1 . 2/1/2007
First, the concrit: Watch your paragraphs. Make sure it's clear who's speaking, or it can be difficult to follow the action.
Now the kudos: This is a really good premise! I liked the explanation of why a Prime could not create his own successor. Very wise...and yet I know why Prime defied the council; that's just his way. Warrior, scholar, explorer...and now creator (or 'father'). Lovely. I also like how you've portrayed Elita-a little unsure because of the duty and distance between them (the walls he's built so he can't care too much about any one person), but still loving him and hurting for him.
His pain is so raw...be careful that it doesn't slide into melodrama (TOO dramatic) and you'll have something here. I want to know what happens, so you must be on the right track. _
| Prime Revolver chapter 2 . 1/18/2007
wow thats all I can say. this one was a little shorter but just as good. update soon plz
| The-Charcoal-Alchemist chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
oO *jaw is on floor* ...wow...update soon!
| optimusprimus001 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
I can't wait for you to update this! It's great! o I'll definitely be watching this one...
| Tiamat1972 chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
This is off to a great start! Update soon!
| MAJANNA chapter 1 . 5/18/2006
Ah, the war truth... very good.