Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of Sacrifice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very goood! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, a very good story but there were too many typos littered throughout the 23 chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Further typo's "When had the slim ball" should be "When had the slime ball" and, "Rent is up for revue" should be "Rent is up for review" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typo, "The badly scared Bill" should be "The badly scarred Bill". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typo "I would stoup so low", should be "I would stoop so low". |
![]() ![]() ![]() Typo's, it's "Booby trap" not "Bobby trap" and it's it's a bolt of "lightning", not a bolt of "lightening". |
![]() ![]() Hermione know about goblins?.. ha ha ha she has no clue about house elf’s! Why would you think she knows about goblins |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting story thanks for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. Great work! |
![]() ![]() Loved the story, thanks for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the RAT SHOULD DIE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sat and read this story through the last couple of days. I really enjoyed it very much and thought it was very well done. The characters were very believable as canon. Thanks for sharing it with us. |