Reviews for Fall of the Sith
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 27 . 2/2
It took me a while to start this. The idea of Mace turning and taking over the government, while not out of idea or character, really, is not something that caught my interest.

Now I have to say that I'm glad I pushed through. I loved your solution and I loved what you did with Anakin and I love what you did with Padme and...this is fabulous. :)
Harrypotterpercyjacksonfan90 chapter 27 . 1/20
Good story love it!
Guest chapter 15 . 12/17/2015
I know this is an older work, and I can only hope that you still monitor reviews... but while Padme is everything brave and courageous here... I can only find her a strategic disaster. What advantage is there in risking martyring yourself and your unborn child(ren) for a nascent faction when she could have so easily hung back to become a motivational bastion for it? *Especially* since you are already elevating her to leadership status within the newborn movement. It just comes off as equally foolhardy and fanatical to me.
Mari Wollsch chapter 27 . 12/9/2015
lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Conor chapter 27 . 11/4/2015
Amazing! Honestly the best fan fcition I have ever read. How you borrowed Stover's style, and made it blend wit your was incredible. A great infinity on how the story could have gone, you should be proud!
lowkey22 chapter 20 . 10/5/2015
Love the story, please update!
Callian31 chapter 24 . 7/14/2015
Awesome, Epic, and MAN Padmé's a badass!
Callian31 chapter 19 . 7/14/2015
I LOVED that scene. It's so Kenobi like.
Callian31 chapter 17 . 7/14/2015
Wow, this is good.
Callian31 chapter 14 . 7/14/2015
Nooooooooooo!
Callian31 chapter 13 . 7/14/2015
*shivers* MAN you made Mace Windup a good villain!
Callian31 chapter 10 . 7/14/2015
I remember that that quote. Padme said it but she's not here so fitting it's Bail.
Callian31 chapter 4 . 7/14/2015
I'm just picturing an ominous Samuel L. Jackson here and it's creepy.
AI chapter 16 . 6/9/2015
Uh huh. Padme, you are so useless in this fight. You have spirit but no brains. And now you've out yourself in danger for no good reason. Tactics is something you apparently will never learn.
AI chapter 13 . 6/9/2015
Eh? Good going Yoda, you shouldn't have stopped the fight.
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