|Reviews for Because of You|
| Godzilla Fan 2012 chapter 3 . 2/22/2013
Please contine! This is a awsome story!
| EyeCandy432 chapter 3 . 7/16/2012
Love it! Please make more!
| Dia chapter 3 . 7/13/2012
Amazing, please do more. 3
| Neogamebuddy0 chapter 3 . 10/18/2010
I really like the story it is much better then mine you are by far one of the best three authers I have seen on fanfic
| Fan Of Games chapter 2 . 5/9/2010
Good day, Patricia de Lioncourt. I've just published a story in the Cthulhu Mythos section of the books category. It's called "The Smell From The Sewers". I'm inviting you to read it and (if you want to) review it.
| Fan Of Games chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Oh yeah, I forgot to add this in to my last review of this story. I have to say that those lines from Kelly Clarkson's "Because Of You" song go with the story pretty well. I have that song on my iPod, and I have to say that it's really good.
| Fan Of Games chapter 3 . 2/6/2010
I'm sorry that this might be a bit late, but the poll you were talking about in Year Five is no longer there. However, even though the poll is no longer there, I'd still like to see this story continued. The Castlevania stories (by you) that I have read so far have impressed me. As a fan of your Castlevania stories, you're the only author (so far) I have favorited. I look forward to reading more Castlevania stories by you.
| James Birdsong chapter 3 . 11/18/2009
Wonderful. Yay! *nod* _
| Jacky-lulu chapter 3 . 11/15/2009
i hope you go on with this story i like it and wish to see how it end.
| Hakion n' Xubose chapter 3 . 7/3/2009
This is the most fascinating story!
I do believe I want you to continue. Exceptionally well written!
| Milica2815 Castlevania Fans chapter 3 . 3/3/2009
Are you going to continue?
| Unknown chapter 3 . 8/28/2008
I like fan fictions, will there be a next chapter?
| Michael chapter 3 . 5/6/2007
I've just read this story, and I must commend you on your handling of the established characters in the Casltevania Canon. I look forward to reading your next installment.
huh...I just read the bottom of this little box and it said:
"A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer."
Ah well..in that case... There was one part of Alucard that seemed a bit out of character for him, indeed even your portrayl of him, which was his line at the end of "Year Five".
“I knew I was going to mess this up,”
I'm having trouble typing what exactly it is that bugs me about this...it doesnt seem like something he would say. He is more classy then "I knew I was going to mess this up". He can feel that way, but him actually saying THOSE words throws him out of the way he normally speaks...eh...for example.
I assume you've played SoTN, when you reach the Master Librarian, in order to get his assistance he doesn't say:
"I'll pay you money."
"You won't go unrewarded..."
Do you see what I'm trying to say? I mean, don't get me wrong, I like this story very much, and would very much like to continue reading it, which I will, but the last line there was just so...not Alucard.
Once again, I love the story and look forward to reading even more of it. Thanks for typing it.
| Corrupted Sanctuary chapter 3 . 2/25/2007
I'm enjoying this piece of writing immensely! Just watching his interaction with Daniella, is making me go, "Aw!" I think Alucard!Daddy! is awesome, and fits, at least to this story anyway!
I can't wait to see how well she does in school - she's the right age to start schooling anyway. And I can tell a brilliance (aka intelligence) from either her true parents or Alucard will shine into her schoolwork - here I'm leaning towards both, nature and nuture.
I think Alucard has done a more than fine job of raising her to be innocent. I bet with all the moving from place to place via carriage ingrained more than a few instincts in her quite thoroughly. To be quiet and observant, not to mention obedient for one - the child will sense even the slightest bit discomfort or tension from the parent, and perceive it to be something affecting, and will learn to be quiet to keep the tension from mounting. She also likes to please her father, this must have come about because of his own quietness.
I sort of could tell that if she had been with Maria and her father, she'd be louder, like the sun, both in rambunctiousness and whatnot. But Alucard's influence has indeed won out, and she's instead like the full moon, still very bright, but not entirely too loud to cause unwanted attention.
I don't want to bore you with all of my analyzing - which most likely means nothing, considering most of it must of been summoned by my over-active imagination! The shame of my being! ... Well, not really, I love my brain! Woot!
Have a good day! :D
| Argentum Ignis chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
I think you've got a really good story, and I love it, because it sticks with the "SotN image" of Alucard, even while introducing him in a totally new scenario. Keep up the good work, and I love your story.