Reviews for 20: Time Crisis
Little bit 1o1 chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
i like
mickomoo chapter 18 . 7/17/2009
yay! It's good to see you again ms. Elegy. I spent the past few days re-reading your older works just for the sake of it, I never noticed 20 was finished until just now, lol.

With great enthusiasm I have to say it was one of your most engaging, aside from a certain trilogy... yeah anyway, as usual you capture the atmosphere of the series very well while making the stories very serious and exciting.

Though I'll admit it was a bit confusing, but when you're dealing with time/space traveling, that's to be expected. You resolved most of my questions before the ending. Anyway, glad to see you're back... you've almost inspired me to finish my works from long ago... almost, I'll see if those projects ever reach the light of day. In any case, keep up the good work!

i AM the Random Idiot chapter 18 . 5/28/2009

Wow, I missed this fandom.
darkflame1516 chapter 18 . 5/28/2009
Okay, amazing epilogue...little depressing but it works well like the same time a bit hopeful is really interesting to think about if you've seen the future but know that it could happen and might not happen...weird. makes me think what i would do if it was me...

well, i was right. Well worth the wait XD I'd wait until the end of time for great writing.

Great job, Elegy!
darkflame1516 chapter 17 . 5/28/2009
wow, yay! an update...and apparently the final update. It's been a long time coming, but it was totally worth the wait :D

just hope this isn't the last fic you'll write, you're still amazing...

Now here's my normal review as I go:

still loving the fight scenes...also like how danny tried to sneak up on dan and just capture him to get it over with...

wow, weird...danny is dizzy and so am i today...

"The world was ablaze with green fire, and he could feel it. Every ant; every blade of grass. Every worm in the dirt, and every insect in the air. All of it, even the dead, sang into his head and buzzed along his nerves. He felt birds singing in a forest too far away to see. He felt the bones of a rabbit, eaten by a fox years before. He felt people, miles away, busy in their cities. Suddenly, Dan’s distraction made sense; Danny wanted nothing more than to stand there and soak it all in. He was a god, he realized; a god of life and death.

Or half of one, at least." that was like...absolutely amazing. My favorite line in the story, i think. it's just beautiful and i'm trying to just imagine how that would feel. you describe it amazingly well :)

whoa...way to win, danny!

and i'm just like in awe of this chap, i feel like i'm just babbling about it XD
Junpaku Karasu chapter 16 . 10/15/2007
Yaay! Clockwork's back! Well, the one we want to be back is back...

Why do I get the feeling that those out there not as smart as me are horribly confuzzled by this fic? And why am I so happy-sadistic about that fact?
JenniferRSong chapter 16 . 9/1/2007
(Rubs temples) I hate time loops. "The past is the future, the future is the past. It all gives me a headache." You've watched quite a few 'Star Trek' episodes, haven't you? (Sigh) Nice update time. See you in the next.
i AM the Random Idiot chapter 16 . 8/29/2007


Poor Mallory...

The Guardiansof Space confuse me a lot... So this cliffhanger left us at Danny meeting the one that represents himself?

darkflame1516 chapter 16 . 8/28/2007
yay, i get to see the choice now! its actually been driving me nuts not knowing which one he'd choose...

ooh, repeating time loop thing...trippy...

lol, the universe is doomed...he he, love that line...

and Mallory is forgetting a lot...i wonder if its on purpose or not...

whoa, even trippier...why does he want to forget? hm...

wow...Danny stuck in a time loop, getting more frustrated by the minute...i can just picture the look of annoyance on his face...

OH CREEPY! i MUST know who it is!

oh, you are really a master of suspense...
JenniferRSong chapter 15 . 8/26/2007
I hope you don't leave us hanging on forever again. You do realize you've been working on this story for one year, three months, and six days as of right now, right? Oh, and this is formerly PotterPhan21. Update soon, please.
darkflame1516 chapter 15 . 8/26/2007
sweetness, more chapter!

oh...Necrowind is so pompous, but he's so cool! and well, evil, but thats to be expected...

whoa...he cracked the crap! Dan's way strong're really good at plot twists by the way...i love them...

oh, i love that line "Danny was rationally scared instead of cripplingly terrified". its both serious, but in a way kinda funny...

lol, pizza! plus, the Fright Knight was a surprise, didn't expect to see him here...or there...or wherever danny is...and Dan's gone AGAIN? wow, he really doesnt like to lose...he runs away...

whoa talk about bleak future...your descrip is very good though, i can picture it vividly...

oh, another plot lifeno Heart power...and a Guardian...i agree with Dan, its creepy...and angry Dan, not good!

ooh, i hope Danny didn't brain his damage! (and yes, that was intentional)

lol, lazy Gods...he he! and btw, ur very good at all the confusing stuff, like the Guardian's rant about he(them) are Clockwork and yet not at the same time...very good that u were able to follow that..

oh, a choice? hmm...i dont know which one i'd make...i know Danny wants a normal life sometimes, but in this messed up timeline he wouldnt get a very good one...and he cant kill someone, so Mallory is out...but would he really be stupid enough to go after Dan? i MUST find out!

i'm so happy ur updating again, even if its only temporary...i love your fics, and was really upset when i found out they might just go *poof* and no more from you...Spectacular work, as usual! THANK YOU FOR SUCH EXCELLENT WRITING!
ToniPendragon chapter 14 . 8/25/2007
Hey. Long time, no see.

I have no idea what the hell is going on, at all, but at least it's intresting.

Well, here's to hoping your muse sticks around for a bit.
i AM the Random Idiot chapter 14 . 8/25/2007

*dies of joy*

And now everything has resumed making sense. YAY SENSE! I'd say, "Update soon," but I understand it'll get done when it's done.

darkflame1516 chapter 14 . 8/25/2007
GASP! YAY! dreams DO come true! i've literally been hoping and praying for you to come back...i missed this story...though i'm a bit confused so i'll prolly be reading it as if u see ur views spike slightly, its prolly me reading it...or its getting popular, which is good too XD

and even temporarily back is better than not at all...

whoa, Danny's recap actually cleared a lot of stuff up...your story was so action packed and in-depth that i was confused, but that really helped...

lol, I love Jack..."Bonsai!"


i would very much like to read more...i hope ur inspiration holds for both you and the sake of dedicated readers like me...XD
Khemria chapter 13 . 2/24/2007
Okay, now I understand you have a bad case of writer's block, but you can't just stop. You have FANS! These reviewers have stuck with your stories for a long time, and you can't give up on them. And, if we tell you what to write about, then the surprises will go away! *sniffle* So thats why I'm not reading any reviews for his chapter

Ja ne,

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