Splendid! In character, well-paced, sweet and soft. Tifa as the leader and Cloud following uncertainly until he is certain is so impossibly Cloti.

Enjoyed this very much. Thanks for the read!

So this was absolutely precious. Sexy without being explicit 3

Oldie but a goodie! Love finding these! I swear 2006-07 were great years for fanfiction.

A ring made of grass..
How cute of cloud .

So cute!

This is really good! Well done!

SOOO GOOD!

This was wonderful. That's the only way I can describe it, actually. :)

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Romantic...

I was wondering..if I were Tifa in this FF.

Did you write the others like this? I mean... Fantasy Romance?

awww so cuuute! love it!

Wonderful! So like them to have such a seemingly simple thing, like the nightly kiss, build up over three whole months until they're both ready to act on it. Tifa was ready to chuck the whole idea of moving him along and he was ready to chuck his whole non-responsive thing. For once, timing was with them. Nicely written and I liked the changed perspectives. Usually that doesn't work as authors often just retread ground, but here you add to each others insights. I see that this was written years ago, but I'm new to this fandom and really enjoy good writing!

awwwwwww *Cries* If only this would happen :') Great job, it was so believable. I wish it was canon :D I laughed at ''He left me to play in the grass?''. I'm adding this to my favourite's x

Awww, how sweet. A ring made out of grass, really thoughtful of Cloud, haha.(:

i really loved this.

fits perfectly with what i thought happened afterwards.

not too sappy, but not too un-sappy.

lovely.

This was really well done. And the contrast between Cloud and Tifa was very distinct and nice.