|Reviews for Someone To Watch Over Me|
| Prepare to be FLAMED Bitch chapter 1 . 2/7/2008
Okay, you want my opinion on this one? Well, you got it!
Thank you for making me do a double-gag on this one. You have some sick, twisted sexual fantasies, you know that? *gag*
As I said before: PWP, PWP, PWP! Also, the storyline started off at a good pace, then it seemed to have committed suicide. Who the hey-hi-hello is going to be grieving *that* much and turn around and indulge in some sex escapade? It makes absolutely no sense! When someone close to me died, I didn't go and throw myself around like a in heat.
If you're going to write a PWP, at least have some semi-decent storyline, but this, my friend, is CRAP!
Better luck next time and thank you for the worst experience of my life!
| rolloffbed chapter 1 . 9/12/2007
So amazingly written. It was so captivating for a story so fake to their characters. but it was still stunningly written :)
| cookie-geek chapter 1 . 8/29/2007
I loved the storyline! porn, porn, porn, porn.
Very nicely written, though a little strnge to see inside your fantasies so graphically!
whatcha gonna write next?
| CarbonCatalyst chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
wow... that was a truely amaxing story. tou definately succeded in capturing the passion between the women. please keep writing.
P.S. while it was hard to know what the hell was going on (due to my never seeing that show) it was still a wonderful story.