|Reviews for Descent|
| Aquiescence chapter 3 . 2/21
i LOVE this stry! I'm typing fast and my 'o' buton seems to be stuck, smehow. -.- but I lve yuo stry!
| Xmazt chapter 48 . 1/6
Long as you haven't updated this novel, I feel I must tell you how much fun your work gave me. I reeeeally love this novel. It's kinda delicate and interesting and the Ed and Roy you wrote were so beautiful and sexy! Thank you for your hard work;-) And I'll be wired with joy if you are willing to continue to update.
| XxHella-ToesxX chapter 48 . 11/30/2013
I love this story o_O seriously...I think you have to be the greatest author on this fanfic ever! No offence to the others, cuz seriously, no offence at them at all. But! Wow! I only wish you could update sooner :( this is the only story I've been reading on here for months now, and now that I'm finally done the story...I wanna cry D: ... To tell the truth, I almost DID cry when Roy got shot and Edward was so scared and so damn confused...Gaah I was going crazy! No words can express how much I adore this story, I wish wish wish! You could update again :) well...thank you for almost giving me a heart attack with this story :3 keep up the good work and live long and prosper.
| MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 48 . 11/7/2013
You said you were continuing... THIS STORY IS SO GOD-DAMN GOOD! Seriously, I read from chapter one to now in only two days! (In the middle of the week, when I go to school and study and do homework, so yeah, I like it a lot, A LOT), and I really can't believe you actually stopped uploading DX This is torture, really... I'VE EVEN TAKEN A LIKING TO SMOKING!ED WHEN I'M COMPLETELY AGAINST SMOKING! AND OMG ROY! AND ED! AND BOTH OF THEM! YOU KILLED ME WITH THIS STORY! I'm just really sad, because it looks discontinued... would you continue it eventually? Because if so, I'll definitely follow it 24h/24, 7 days/7!
I LOVE YOU AND THIS STORY!
| fantasy chapter 48 . 11/7/2013
you should make a schedule between work and hobbies, or else you would become rather disturbingly forgotten and uninterest for continuing because of work. YOU ARE REALLY A GENIUS FOR MAKING THIS FIC, BUT AFTER NEARLY 3 YEARS! FOR GOD SAKE, JUST CONTINUE THIS FIC!
| ImJustFunSized chapter 48 . 7/2/2013
I completely agree with NowlsAPresent. Please continue the story! Please! There definitely needs to be A LOT more added. It can't end now! Ed and Al need to make up. And Roy and Ed need to "settle down" if u know what I mean. (which u probably won't since nobody does) If ur not dead. Which I hope ur not dead. Then please finish the story!
| NowIsAPresent chapter 47 . 6/14/2013
Sorry, I accidentally clicked the "Post Review" button, I haven't finished my lamentation yet, I'm afraid. (See chapter 48 review by me! Read that first then continue this one!) So please, if you're not dead, please, please continue your story. I feel I haven't even gotten to the juicy part of the fanfic yet! I'm still in the dark in the whole People's Government and you're just leaving me, no, US, your loyal fans, hanging there... I don't want to push you too much, but it HAS been around 3 years since you last updated. And every time I reread the story, I feel as though I have this thorn in my side that I am incapable of removing and the only thing that can soothe that irritating pain is by reading each chapter and hoping, praying that one day you would continue the story again and perhaps, complete it.
If you can still read this, ZaKai, know that you have successfully made this reader fall head over heels over Descent!
| NowIsAPresent chapter 48 . 6/14/2013
O dear author, I am simply physically incapable of expressing everything this fanfiction has given to me. I swear I'm in this love-hate relationship with it: hate because of how addicting it is, but love at the same time for the emotional roller coaster rides Descent seems to provide every single chapter. I absolutely adore how you managed portray the relationship of each couple, starting from AlWin, to RoyEd and maybe a bit of Hawkeye/Havoc! The angst... The fluff... The feels... asdfghjkl; I cant even-
Alas, I understand that the era of FMA is nearing to an end - if not already completely over. And I am also aware that it is very difficult to pick up something that has been abandoned (Has the fanfic been abandoned?) but honestly, I find that this would be a sincere waste if it were left alone to rot and be forgotten in a lonely corner on this big website.
| rqgenevieve chapter 13 . 6/2/2013
| rqgenevieve chapter 12 . 6/2/2013
| rqgenevieve chapter 11 . 6/2/2013
BAD ROY :\
| rqgenevieve chapter 10 . 6/2/2013
that's what she said!
| rqgenevieve chapter 9 . 6/2/2013
Awww, so freaking adorable :3
| rqgenevieve chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
So hot ;]]]]
| rqgenevieve chapter 7 . 6/2/2013
Apples. . .