|Reviews for Descent|
| inuyashamunkey chapter 48 . 5/30
makes me sad u havent updated i hope you decide to soon.
| NightTheEternalRulerOfTheSky chapter 48 . 2/18
you should update this soon it's really good
| Jealous Jack chapter 42 . 11/19/2015
I think Al forgot his brother's birthday.
| WrathAndRain chapter 48 . 10/25/2015
I know it's been five years since the last update, but I'm in complete love with this story and I hope you continue it. :D
| Guest chapter 48 . 6/1/2015
I am enjoying the characterization in your story. Are you going to update again someday? Thank you for writing this, I enjoyed reading the story so far.
| Guest chapter 48 . 12/12/2014
This is so good! Like wow...
But like GEEZUS WHAT DID EDWARD SACRIFICE FOR ALPHONSE'S BODY!
I'm DESPERATE to know! Did I miss something or was I supposed to read between the lines! XD
Besides that it's so good and I just loved their reuinion! #RoyEd! ️️️️
| KosmikQuixotic chapter 4 . 10/6/2014
I totally get what Ed is going through here. Sometimes I get these awful moods when I'm angry all the time and I hate everyone and everything. Someone can do the tiniest thing and it'll just set me off. I'll start screaming and cursing and I go insane. Like, hysterically kicking and punching, breaking shit. It's really freaking awful. Sometimes the only way to make it go away would be to cut. One time I got myself stuck in a mental hospital for the tantrum I threw. When I got one there, I got shot with a sedative and had to be restrained. It was so awful because I didn't know why I was feeling that way. I didn't understand and I'd get more frustrated. I really hurt some people that way, and I lost a lot of friends. I take mood stabilizers now, but before I had them.. God.
Okay, that just was really personal right there... awkward. Anyways, I just wanted to say I really liked the story. Yeah. Okay. Bye.
| hinatamesias18Echizen chapter 48 . 8/29/2014
charm me! I read it in one sitting !, please then I want to know what will happen now and want to get together and ed ! I have also urge to kill or Russel and hit the haha, but hey that's apart ...
I keep seeing more interested in the growth of Ed, waaa when I see the things that woaa !
| hinatamesias18Echizen chapter 45 . 8/29/2014
Winry and are complete idiots, Al is too good and confident which makes them extremely maniulable and winry is a estipida if both love, not really parce, more problems, at least for me, it really does not help habarca not me like winry ...
Beyond that encata your fic and I'll keep reading!
| Guest chapter 22 . 7/14/2014
| HTTYD-PJATO-ROTG-41185 chapter 48 . 6/28/2014
Its been 4 years
You still updating?
| Guest chapter 48 . 5/29/2014
So you will never finish this story? :[ Such a great story.
| RebootRock chapter 48 . 3/21/2014
Even if i agree with the other reviews, i need to leave a comment too, because i know how It can please a writer and how it can maybe give them hope again... I read your story within a really short amount of time, because you make it so addictive and well-written, overall ! This. Is. So. Great. You have This style, the style that is So much simple that it's perfect in the end. You describe all the emotions with such precision, you make us hate or love, or you even make us find something or someone annoying or nice whereas it was absolutely not the case at the beginning ! It's simply amazing. I really love your work. I know that everyone is asking you to update, and i am in the same case, but i also understand the complete lack of time, since i "dropped" a story of my own like that, merely because i just don't have the inspiration anymore, or i am too busy really... And i am sure you are aware that it must be a torture for us your readers, but you just can't help it ... And it's horrible as a feeling !
Anyway, i support you, and i will continue to follow your story in hopes to see it updated one day or another. Because you are truly an excellent writer, please believe it.
I wish you all the best.
| Aquiescence chapter 3 . 2/21/2014
i LOVE this stry! I'm typing fast and my 'o' buton seems to be stuck, smehow. -.- but I lve yuo stry!
| Xmazt chapter 48 . 1/6/2014
Long as you haven't updated this novel, I feel I must tell you how much fun your work gave me. I reeeeally love this novel. It's kinda delicate and interesting and the Ed and Roy you wrote were so beautiful and sexy! Thank you for your hard work;-) And I'll be wired with joy if you are willing to continue to update.