Reviews for Sunny Day
opaque-girl chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Um preety random but it was really cute and sweet and i loved the last line... Im adding it to favourites.. N plz plz plz do write a sequal!

Pooja
ALifeOfShadows chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
I really liked the "why flaunt the name?" part.

The ending-ended too quickly.

Good job though!
magnificentX chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
Really random ending, not to sure this one should have been a one shot.
you're my Star chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Ahh, I liked this. I liked how you told it in little snippets, it was very-to-the-point.

The dialouge made me smile. ]
Lily Evans Potter Star chapter 1 . 9/15/2006
That was adorable-the ending was a bit confusing for the simple minded but i loved it nonetheless!

Happy Writing!

Lily
BlahBabe chapter 1 . 9/13/2006
This started out as a good story, the ending was kind of pathetic though.

Good job, though.
Prongs'LilyFlower chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
aww cute

i like it

thnx 4 reviewing me 2 ]

PLF

x
black111star chapter 1 . 8/4/2006
way too fast if they had had some history together then maybe, but otherwise no way, i dont knwo what you were thinking.
momo and zuko make me happy chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
wow ...

that was very unexpected. this would have been a wole lot better if you had made it longer and didn't move the sory alndg so fast.

oh well! that is what one-shot's are for right?

love it!

peace out,

m & z m m h
Goddess of the Fiery Goblet chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
umm...sorta a corny ending dontcha think? Oh well it's yer story. later!
Farie Insignias chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
That was kind of rushed... Don't be afraid to take your time writing, really get into it and most importantly, enjoy it! It was still good, but you can do better! Keep writing!
PearloftheOcean chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Everything happened so fast!I mean they love each other straight away!Good story line though, could have made it a bit longer with more detail, like how they felt when they kissed or something.

x

PearloftheOcean