|Reviews for Runaway Duology Part 1: Runaway|
| Misti Wolan chapter 4 . 12/19/2006
That was unpredictable up until Zekk died; then I realized what you were doing. _ But you carried it off well.
Good job! (If you don't remember me, I used to be "MistiWhitesun.")
| Ink Knight chapter 4 . 7/6/2006
Cool twist, I mean hes not really Zekk, but he is.
| Mahnarch chapter 4 . 5/27/2006
The first couple of chapters seemed, to me, a bit of a run-on. You pounded the abuse a little too much.
You probably could have used a little more filler to expand on the boy himself. I never really felt a connection with the character, as he jumped through time fairly quickly.
The fact that he becomes Zekk, genius. "Zekk" never uses jedi abilities because he hasn't been trained in the arts. Good show, old top, in not breaking the rules.
Now I shall read the other fics with a new set of eyes.
You could have done without the song bits, however.
I mostly skipped over those parts, as I didn't find them relevent.
I now have to read Part 2 to see if things have gone for the better.
I give this story:
3 Kung-fu chops out of 5 for creativity.
1 Kung-fu chop for exposition and format.
| Master Solo chapter 3 . 5/20/2006
Whoa you sure have a thing for writing Zekk and doing massive updates on (as in upload everything at once after a 2-year-long dry spell).