|Reviews for Runaway Duology Part 2: Reckoning|
| BlackHalliwell chapter 4 . 10/2/2006
| Mahnarch chapter 4 . 5/27/2006
Big writers' error, here.
You started the Intro and Chapter 1 in first person and ended with Ch#2 and 3 in third person.
I know this is hard. Just read my 'Behind the Dark Side' story. I have to continually think, "am I in the past or present?", as I'm writing as I'm going back and forth, constantly.
I like the story, however. I also like how you dropped the song bits. Good show.
5 out of 5 Kung-fu chops all around.