|Reviews for Doodles|
| Ese chapter 5 . 4/25/2012
I do not understand what went on in this chapter at all
| MoustahcesAndPistachios chapter 10 . 12/13/2009
it was a really good story but instead of saying shook (cos that sounds like no) say nodded (cos that sounds like she's saying yes) apart from that it was a really good story that i stayed up till midnight to finish reading XD
| time4 chapter 10 . 9/3/2009
I love it! that was really sweet!
| hippogriff-tamer chapter 10 . 12/11/2008
love all the fluffy goodness between Edward and Bella and Alice loves to make Bella wear lots of make up and pretty clothes sometimes its so hilarious...
| Words-To-Choke-Upon chapter 10 . 6/14/2008
Now I have to read a Hazy Flickering Candle again because I read it first! Both stories are awesome though! By the way you can capture things in your stories that many people findd hard to accomplish! Good for you!
| love-edward chapter 3 . 2/26/2008
I love this story keep goin. and ya there are a lot of spelling mistakes but we all make them right? lol I understood what you were saying so it doesn't matter, lol! Oh I can't wait to read what happens next! Good job,
| junayd chapter 10 . 1/30/2008
| kimicka13 chapter 2 . 11/14/2007
love it good job
| All.The.RageR chapter 10 . 11/12/2007
boy, did i love this!
you're fantastic. why can't all guys be like edward?
| TheKarlyFries chapter 1 . 7/11/2007
i agree with the person below. you obviously have no experience, or micro. word. please stop writing until you can spell words correctly.
| daydreamdana84 chapter 10 . 3/11/2007
AWESOME.. i lurve ur story hurray for the sequel ;)
| Not saying chapter 7 . 3/6/2007
I love your story! it's so much fun! (sorry i haven't reviewed sooner. I'm lazy) What did edward break? i am a very curious person, sorry. Still want to know though! hehe. Doog Boj!
| Miri Forrests chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
I can definitly tell that you have no experiance what so ever in the writing area. It shows. Try to make the conversation a little more orginal and tone down the mushy love talk. The more you put in, the more it seems unrealistic and cheesy. Try to stick to the charactors orginal personality.
| Edward Cullen brings sexy back chapter 10 . 1/13/2007
loved it omg fabulous
| Edward Cullen brings sexy back chapter 9 . 1/13/2007
YEAH SWEETNESS and LOTS A FLUFF LOVED IT