Reviews for Internship
RedKaddict chapter 6 . 6/13/2006
Duh-duh-dun! Oh, the suspense! I wonder who it is! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon! I LOVe this story! It just gets better every time.
KILLERGRIM23 chapter 5 . 6/2/2006
elmthesmartypants chapter 5 . 6/1/2006
Like I said earlier, it still kind of seems that you're rushing it. Plus what was Clark doing the entire time that Peter was fighting Harry? Making popcorn?
RedKaddict chapter 5 . 6/1/2006
AH! More villians? I can't wait to see who! Please update again soon!
jw chapter 4 . 5/28/2006
great story update soon
Ryn18 chapter 4 . 5/28/2006
I can hear the Green Goblin's cackle from here...

Up, Up and Away! Apider-Man, Spider-Man doesn whatever a spider can...

I agree with elmthesmartypants. You have a great sotryline, but it needs to be more developed. I feel this would add much more depth. Try adding some more depth to the green goblin. My spidy-sense is tingling in the evil villian deptartment. There's a lot of potential there. Perhaps you could bring in a villian from the Superman universe?

Keep up the good work! Update soon. :)
Perpetually Clueless chapter 4 . 5/27/2006
love the story keep writing
elmthesmartypants chapter 4 . 5/26/2006
It was interesting. Perhaps you should try to get a bit more detailed on events, don't make it go so quickly. Great storyline though!
FiveForFighting09 chapter 4 . 5/26/2006
i'm more than a bird...i'm more than a plane...sry as i read that last part it just reminded me of the the cross over
RedKaddict chapter 4 . 5/26/2006
It's a bird! It's a plane! Heehee... I like this story! I can't wait to see how it all plays out. Update soon!
elmthesmartypants chapter 3 . 5/25/2006
Cool. Naughty naughty Harry!
CindyB chapter 2 . 5/23/2006
Hehehe. Very cool.
alt chapter 2 . 5/23/2006
i love it! please continue! i love spiderman and superman, they are my favs
clois4ever chapter 2 . 5/22/2006
great start! lol clark is a photographer! you have got to update!
Scary-Girly chapter 2 . 5/22/2006
pretty good! UPDATE SOON!
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