|Reviews for Mea Culpa|
| balefullbrowneyes chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
really really really good poetry. finally someone who can write decent narratives!
p.s. I assume that the title is latin and its supposed to mean my fault right? if so then its mea culpa. there isnt a cupa in the latin language. :)
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 13 . 10/30/2007
The ending was my favorite part. Great poem, and I love the way the words form together and move. Your poetry is brilliant, as always. I'm not suprised that I've fallen in love with another piece of your work. :D
| ForeverACharmedOne chapter 13 . 10/24/2007
*applause* You have a fantastic way with words! Your skill never ceases to amaze me!
| Ron's Sweetie chapter 12 . 10/16/2007
Great new chapter. I love it. Update soon. You have a true talent.
Keep up the good work.
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 12 . 10/16/2007
(sighs) Your poetry is always so lovely, but very, very depressing. This certain one has to be one of my favorite ones though. Good work. :D
I've been really busy with band lately, (My marching band is going to State! woot!) so I haven't been able to read very often. But I promise you, the moment I get a time in at home, I've be reading everything you've written so far. I saw that you have a new story out, and I can't wait to investigate. :D
| ForeverACharmedOne chapter 12 . 10/15/2007
Beautiful. Your talent never ceases to amaze me! :D
| ForeverACharmedOne chapter 11 . 9/26/2007
*applause* Your poetry is amazing! I swear that if you don't get published in some way, shape, or form, it's a sin, an abomination I tell you! :D
Anyway, I look forward to anything else written by you! :)
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 10 . 7/7/2007
Wow. As before, your poetry ceases to amaze me. I hope you write more. Thanks. :D
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 9 . 5/2/2007
What a thought provoking piece. I loved it, as I love all of your work. You write with power I could never obtain. Wonderful job. :D
God, I've had a bite of writer's block these past few months, so I'm trying my best right now to get in some time to write. I'm sure you know what I mean.
Well, I'm off to write a little, and of course read some more of your beautiful story Embrace, so chao.
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 8 . 5/2/2007
Haunting. It made me feel almost dreamy, if that makes sense, like it was oozing out through lines that I could honestly understand. Great poem. Your words are stunning.
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 7 . 5/2/2007
The description and metaphors were lovely. Loved it. Great work, as usual. :D
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 6 . 5/2/2007
Why must all of our writes be so depressing? Then again, they are still really, really good when you write them, but so sad. (sighs)
This freeverse was beautiful. The questions were strangely easy to relate to, and the emotion, hidden within all of your work, still astounds me. Brilliant piece. :D Thank you!
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 5 . 5/1/2007
I have absolutely nothing to say about this poem. Anything I could say would be a HUGE understatement, and that just wouldn't do. So not a word...
...Ok, it was awesome, I loved it, and I don't think I've ever read anything that was so heartfelt and deep to me. I could relate like crazy, and I love you dearly for this wonderful poetry. Thank you!
| Remember chapter 9 . 4/30/2007
SEE? *points at screen* MORE proof that you are more of a poet than I. I SO win... and yes, there was a contest. Please wipe the confused look off your face. Thank you. :D
I envy you... *grin* Yes I do.
And that's all there is to say.
Love you much! (in a totally NON HARASSING way... isn't it sad that we have to specify that these days?) and please update SOMETHING soon! :D
-Rem (the selfish, egotistical bitch who was told she is socially innate and has no personality. Yes. Someone told me that this weekend. Someone close to me too... on this site... who I trusted. *sniff* I DO TO have a personality! Just b/c I'm no good at talking on the phone doesn't mean I'm socially innate and have no goddamn personality! AT LEAST I HAVE AN EFFIN LIFE!... 0_0 Why am I ranting to you? -So sorry. I should be yelling at someone else... *goes to find beta*)
| Paper Butterfly8 chapter 8 . 3/1/2007
Ardina, you have a beautiful skill with words. I enjoyed reading this.