|Reviews for Mea Culpa|
| Remember chapter 7 . 2/20/2007
*sighs* I love the deep stuff you throw at us. And I absolutely ADORE for a trillion other reasons, i.e. your fuckingly amazing writing skillz :) But I don't want your ego bigger than Dracula's. lol MUST. READ. EMBRACE! *runs away*
| Remember chapter 6 . 2/12/2007
very emotive (I think that's the word I'm looking for)... rather different from your other peices of work. But I liked it. There are pieces of it that I can certainly relate to. You're a natural, hon!
| Hammermaster chapter 6 . 2/12/2007
Beautiful. I could almost feel your pain as I read this.
| Hammermaster chapter 5 . 2/12/2007
Wow, that was beautiful. Still bringing in the good stuff I see.
Keep up the good work
| Remember chapter 5 . 2/5/2007
*needs a tissue*
Oh Ardina... I'm sorry about your love-troubles. I know... it sucks. But it does create some beautiful poetry, no?
I just hope you feel better soon! I know there's nothing really to say here... so I won't even try.
| Hammermaster chapter 4 . 12/24/2006
Not really emo, and not the most dark thing I've ever read. If you think that's dark you should read some of Edgar Allen Poe. But I'm a fan of spiritual horror and the like, so what can I say? Brilliant again, however I fail to see what all this has to do with Van Helsing. Not that I'm disappointed mind you. You might think about not posting your poems on the internet and actually trying to get them published, because they are original enough to be classified as non-fanfiction.
| Hammermaster chapter 2 . 12/24/2006
Very beautiful. You truly are a master of poetry, but lets face it, you've learned from one of the masters (Robert Frost). Personally I'm partial to Oliver Wendell Holmes and a bit of Poe every now and then.
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 4 . 11/30/2006
*applauds* That was positively wonderful! (although it made me slightly depressed by its unnerving beauty in how it is truly easy to fall asleep in the cold and never wake from the dream. A masterpiece at its best, and I do hope there are more poems to follow! Thank you!
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 3 . 11/30/2006
That one was a true heartbreaker. I couldn't help but imagine Dracula, standing within a forest with a sad expression on his face, watching leaves wither and float by like the words. A very stunning piece, and I will well know that you have remarkable sense of poetry. It makes me want to write. Thank you!
| No Longer In Use9 chapter 2 . 11/30/2006
Wow. Simply amazing, my friend. I know I must be a little late reading these, but this one was truly brilliant. Kudos, friend, kudos!
| Remember chapter 4 . 11/6/2006
Damn. You're amazing Ardina... fucking amazing... that was... wow... I need to splash some cold water on my face. Excuse me.
| Lady Wednesday chapter 4 . 11/3/2006
O! You mentioned Embrace!
| Remember chapter 3 . 10/31/2006
Jesus Christ Ardina, how do you do it? 0_o I suck at writting poetry, but you seem to do it as if its like breathing!
And I'm so sorry to hear that you're dead... I'll be dead in a couple of days... college *shudders*... I swear... its OF THE DEVIL! AND ITS NOT DRACULA (who is of the devil too. But he's infinitely better than school and is SO worth every minute of my time... but alas... no such luck... *grumbles* stupidmother-. I'm done. :)
HAPPY HALLOWEEN! I look forward to another update from you... if you ever decide to come back from the dead and grace us with another one of your GLORIOUS chapters! :)
| Believer29 chapter 3 . 10/31/2006
I swear, I haven't read anything with a happy tone in ages. But I don't care. I think the deep stuff gives it more meaning. Thanks for the update, I can't wait for more.
| Spaztic Arwen chapter 3 . 10/30/2006
that last poem was my favorite. it's beautiful. what part of the film, or which character inspired it?