Reviews for Melt My Heart
Dawns Heart chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
For starters there were no mistakes regarding the powers, and for another thing: WOW. That's all i have to say: WOW. Because this story was great! :D
Iridescent Twilight chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
This is just... beautiful. I love it.
HondaAshiya chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
I want more Ryro stories/one-shots from you!

This was cute.
xLiLixcRaZy4rUpErTx chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
...sniff... that was beautiful...i just love roguepyro stories, roguebobby are cute too but i think pyrorogue is better
erin chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
that was so great please write more!
Thefartherside chapter 1 . 7/4/2006 it once, and had to reread. Very impressed, will look forward to more stories in this ship!
freakochicko chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
Gosh, this is really, really good! I loved the pacing. I loved all of it. RyRo is forever.
angry-blonde911 chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Who cares about power mistakes,

Excelent story,

Good writing,

Better than most
CC chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
*sniff* That was so beautiful. Bravo. Bravo. CC scale gives it two thumbs up. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope to see more of your writing soon.


Glamour-Rogue chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
OMG. Loved it. (Freyja from Fanforum here) I would totally love a sequel (so we could see the aftermath of all this, you know, a jealous Bobby and so on ;) Would totally rock) Would love if you could write more fics :D
PsychoTherapy chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
This is such an awesome story, you should think about doing more chapters..

Hikairi chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
so sweet and so subtle. loved it. keep up the good work and i hope to read more soon
mellowgold chapter 1 . 6/7/2006
Perfect is the only word I can think to describe this. I could just *feel* every moment, words weren't needed. Very sensual and passionate, but as Carla-p said, still innocent. I really hope you write more fics in the future.
Carla-p chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
Wow -this was brilliant - it was poweful writing, innocently written and yet full of erotic promise - at least that's how it seemed to me, what they did was so powerful and intense. I loved this! x
Coletterby chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
that was really good, personnally i'm hard pushed not to come to your door and pound on it to ask whats next! lol u shud definately write more ryro stuff its brilliant!
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