Reviews for Ambrosius Speaks
RISHIE RISHIEDODO.COM.AU chapter 1 . 9/13/2009
i LOVE YOUR POEM i THOUGHT IT WAS VERY GOOD BUT IF YOU DON'T MIND A TOUCH OF CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM THERE WAS ONE LINE THAT DIDN'T QUITE WORK:

He knows that this battle will finally be at last won

IT'S JUST THAT FINALLY AND AT LAST MEAN JUST ABOUT THE SAME THINGS INTHIS CONTEXT, PERHAPS JUST USING ONE OF THEM WOULD WORK B ETTER. I THOUGHT IT WAS A GREAT POEM THOUGH.
Giggel chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
I like your tone and stlye of the poem! Keep creating! :)