Reviews for The Great Scam
Guest chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
also in chapter 5 you make sonic say he is tone deaf watch sonic underground not only is he a good singing he can play a guitar plus "i'm a tone-deaf mothafucka" had me in stiches. i can see sonic saying that like a gangster if you know what i mean
not saying again chapter 6 . 12/2/2012
this is the best sonouge story i have ever read. please make more like maybe a what if type thing like maybe at the start sonic jumps down and argues with knuckles after he pushes rouge to the ground or something like that. the part where rouge says to sonic "you better not be looking at what i think you're looking at" did you come up with that or did you research the couple before doing this
not saying chapter 5 . 12/2/2012
brilliant story i thought sonic was gonna deck knuckles after what he said to rouge
Officer Hotpants chapter 6 . 12/1/2012
So good I had to re-read it, and now that I've got an account, I can favorite it, too.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
AzureQueen chapter 6 . 5/24/2012
I love it! Great work!
Troy168 chapter 6 . 1/16/2012
Great story, but you shoulded rated M
Richy1991 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
great story
OHP chapter 6 . 3/25/2011
Masterful. Just absolutely... GOD I wish you owned the Sonic franchise! Short as it was, that was easily one of the best fics I've dver read on here, and I've read probably a good 150 fics in the last three or four months, alone. *patiently waits for the snickering and finger-pointing to die down* That was also hands-down THE most heart-warming romance I have ever read (actual books included), and as you might have guessed, I read a LOT! PLEASE never stop writing romance; You have a way with words such that I almost felt like 'I' was the one in love lust reading it. 'Course, now I'm just feeling depressed over being alone... *grumbles: "bastard . ..."* ;)
Guest chapter 6 . 3/7/2011
This story had a sweet ending. The sexual scene kinda just popped out at me lol but you wrote this good It has me thinking of writing a story about them.
Thoughtful Tikal chapter 5 . 3/6/2011
I like how you explained how Sonic wonders if he needs more than just adventure. That's a very good point to me.
Thoughtful Tikal chapter 4 . 3/6/2011
It would make more sense if you explained yo us what Rouge was wearing before Sonic noticed. Other than that, I like his way of making Knuckles look bad. Also the thing where Julie-Su asks, why can't Knuckles do something like that? Moments like that are funny to me:D
Thoughtful Tikal chapter 3 . 3/6/2011
Where you said "he joyfully asked her", you should have taken away the word joyfully because it has a whole different meaning than what it sounds like you mean. But I like this story so far. You have the characters doing alright with their behaviors
sonic the hedgehog chapter 6 . 2/25/2011
me:that was AWESOME!

rouge:I feel the same way blue boy

*we kiss*


me and rouge:?


me:i love her you furry basterd

*tails runs away while me and rouge start makeing out

p.s. pass the tissues
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